Reviews for Never trip on the same stone twice |
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Monster King chapter 1 . 11/30/2018 Great work |
Mernom chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 I want a full version of this! |
Ferm chapter 1 . 7/1/2014 I hope you continue it :) |
DarkRings chapter 1 . 6/27/2014 A promising start. Update soon. |
Duncan0Idaho chapter 1 . 5/4/2014 So it's this supposed to be a mockery of those fics where Minato and Kushina have two children and Naruto is the un favorite? |
Sanz0girl chapter 1 . 11/17/2013 This one's it's really interesting. Hope it is continued |
Clarilyn chapter 1 . 9/30/2013 Loads of potential here! Please update soon, the possibilities are really exciting! |
sekmarcspn chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 A promising start. I can't wait to see what you do with it. Happy Writing! |
mortalone chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 Wow. Just... yeah, color me impressed. |
Clove15 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 Update soon |
Aidan McKing chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 Thank you, I enjoyed the beginning of what I hope is a very long story. There are so few stories about Namikaze Minato that actually deviate from the tragedy of cannon that its refreshing to see the start of another. With great hope for a new chapter soon. Aidan Mcking |
Anime Chick344034 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 Please write more! |
Tsuyo no seishin chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 Fantastic first chapter, I'm really looking forward to reading more. Pros: Interesting premise, almost flawless grammar and spelling, smooth flowing language. Cons: Maybe it's because it's supposed to be dramatic and Minato would admittedly be pretty short on breath, but you really seem to love using ellipses(...), which just sort of stuck out to me. P.S. : First review! :D |