Hello I wanted to tell you how awesome your work is, it's really cute and sexy at the same time and it has this flirty atmosphere that is making the world softer.
I don't know if I am making any sense but my point is: you write beautifuly, I really enjoyed reading this story.
I hope you are feeling better and even if this was posted months ago and you may never read this I wanted you to know that you are good. I mean I hope you are well. I also hope you will have good days and that there are people you can rely on.

Alright...First of all: congrats on you getting your AS and almost getting your diploma. Hopefully, since you wrote this almost 2 months ago, perhaps both of those statements are complete now. Also, I am sorry to hear about your 'fiance'...Though people often turn out not to be what we first perceive them to be. I sincerely hope that you have found ways to combat your depression, and that you never give up-no matter how hopeless it can seem at times. I've been extremely lucky in my life, for having an amazing support group that has been there for me for anything that has been thrown at me, but for those that don't have that, then I think the next best thing thaty yu can do is exactly what you did: reach out and attempt to create one. BTW: if you wanna talk, you can feel free to PM me-I might not respond right away, but I always love to meet new people and talk.

Personally, I like this story, and didn't notice any huge changes in writing styles-but I know that we, as authors, are always extremely critical of our work. Though, most of the people that I've interacted with on this site have been pretty amazing, so I wouldn't be afraid to post your work. Us readers are incredibly thankful for people who have the courage to share their innermost thoughts with us. And, if you feel that you have to rewrite the fic to meet your standards, then I say go for it. Expecially if it will generate new ideas and avenues for you.

Just hang in there, some times it doesn't seem like it, but it does get better (I know it's hard to see it when you're so close to the situation, but even on the worst days there is a possibility for joy)

Jack, is so stupid. No he's not stupid he just enjoys making incredibly stupid decisions. Weirdo.

hey, good luck meeting your fiance. and please update. You're an amazing writer.

You write amazingly. I'm just dying of laughter. And Baby Toot, who knew she was so sneaky.

I am dying of laughter. I can't breathe. You are an amazing writer.

Ok, first: I LOVE YOUR STORY. UNDESCRIBABLE! I NEARLY DIED! *V*

Second: You've never met your fiance in real life?! Wow! I can't donate(sorry :'() cause I'm like, fifteen and I unfortunately don't have a credit card or anything that allows me to do any form of payment online, but I shall share it with the rest of this web! And I'll take a look! :)

Love your story btw! Incredibly, positively, unimaginably, unbelievably AMAZING.

This is a really good story, I want to see what will happen. Please continue it!

Proposing in a fanfic...That. Is. Awesome!

Loved the chapter. I wanted to write more in this review but that sort of just threw me off XD Best of luck :D

Did you just propose in a fanfic? That is so cute and sweet! Best of luck for you two! XD
I loved the story it is so amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

oh my god i love this story! i can't wait for the next chapter! thank you for writing this!

Wow this was amazing!
I love how you write, if that makes any sense.

YOU GO AND GET SOME, SANDMAN

Bunny! Aw man, was that Sophie?

On another note, I would like to make a formal announcement: Bless you Baby Tooth.

Oh, and Hiccup and Jack are really stupid dorks

Love the story.

This is a wonderful and completely adorable story that I can't wait to read more of .
Please don't stop updating.

Very nice fanfic. I ll wait the next chapter :)