Very nice little story, well-written and I think you capture the characters very well here. I love this relationship and you've done a wonderful job with it. Great work!

I really love this. I'm a massive Robb/Talisa shipper even though I'm a huge fan of the books as well - and I'm surprised there's only like ten fanfics of them on . And yours was one of the nicest to read, to be quite honest. :)

-cluelessclown.

i read the books and i actually like this relationship than robbs with jeyne (book version of talisa). well, thats hardly a relationship. he has sex with her after finding out about rickon and bran, shes his prisoner, so even if she didnt want to, shed only risk lives of her family, because she doesnt know him and that he wouldnt do that. next morning, robb feels so guilty, he immediately marries her. eventually, they fall in love, but thats all "off-screen", we only see her saying they did and standing next to him, quiet, little scared, obedient.
on the other hand, i like book version of robb in this better. in show, hes just naive boy, who lost everything for love. she slept with him before marriage already, she wouldnt stop. in books, he doesnt love her, but if someone find out about their night, shed have her whole reputation ruined. as i wrote, she couldnt refuse him, so shed pay for what he did. she isnt from family important enough for someone marrying her anyway and if robb lost or kept the borders and returned to the north, shed be daughter of lannisters bannerman that slept with stark king, currently their biggest enemy. that would be horrible fate. plus if she got pregnant, robb would made a bastard and he saw how jon and both his parents suffered because of that. he cant let all of that happen, he was raised better by ned. freys were definitely going to leave him, but this was his mistake, hell be to pay for it. thats character.

but to actually write the review, i liked it, but it wasnt nothing new. i cant even dislike it, i saw it in the show and i already liked it there. you just added inner thoughts, which are usually explained in some behind-the-scenes video. write some ff story with your event and ill see.

nice

Nice story, I don't know why more people don't ship them.

Love, love, love this fic! I was surprised to find anyone who ships these two, let alone writes beautiful passages involving them. The prose is perfect and recounts each of their encounters excellently. Please complete the second part soon :) looking forward to more of your writing