I liked it. Very well written. Very sweet.

This is really beautiful, liked how you wrote the characters. Only suggestion? It would be easier to follow the characters’ spoken dialogue if you inserted direct quotation marks, or else it becomes confusing to decipher between speech and thoughts.

Fantastic...

Wow...more please. Great story.

great one shot!

I wanted to PM you this massage, but I can't... hope this will help:

Hello,

I'm writing you this massage in the light of the upped restriction if M/MA rating system in .(1) The unofficial rumors are that all the accounts with stories that are incorrectly rated (having explicit contents) are going to be deleted. As I think it's unfair and I don't want to loose my fav stories nor fav authors, I'm writing this massage both to warn my fav authors and to inquire if they have other account, were the M/MA rated stories could be found. I hope it will give them time to save their stories/reviews and move them to more friendly site. I'd greatly appreciate any information of the future of your stories.

Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Wish you the best.

mychakk

(1) The notice:

June 4th 2012 - Notices:

Please note we would like to clarify the content policy we have in place since 2002. follows the Fiction Rating system ranging from Fiction K to Fiction M. Although Fiction Ratings goes up to Fiction MA, since 2002 has not allowed Fiction MA rated content which can contain adult/explicit content on the site. only accepts content in the Fiction K through Fiction M range. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA and has not been allowed on the site since 2002.

I loved it! Such a beautiful story!

Brought tears to my eyes. Truly. Great piece of work.

Fantastic! Every emotion was intensely felt through the whole story all the way through to the end. It was tenderness without being cheesy, pain without being cliche, and love without being corny. Wonderful story. :)

Aw.

Aw... What a sweet story I loved it.

Hey this was a really good story. It was touching and I love your portrayal of their reletionship. It made me feel fluffy and warm inside. Are Ororo and Wolverine together in the comics? Please email me back.

Amazing,

I love your style. It has fluff but it's not so fluffy that it's so unrealistic or hard to picture.

I love it! Beautiful...

That was so good! You are an excellent writer(which I'm sure you know)! Geez how long have I been missing your work! How did they slip by me on the Just In page? Someone recomended your fics and I'm so glad I'm reading them. Anyway, I love the Remy/Ro friendship, and their talk. I also like how you pulled us into the story with snippets of conversation, and then finally let us know why he left. Also, excellent use of a mustang,a gazebo and Wolverine's New York apartment!