Reviews for Don't Leave Me |
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NodMPortant chapter 32 . 6/12 Great job on your story, it's quite an interesting take on Percy Jackson. I hope that you publish your SAO x Percy Jackson crossover as I'd be very interested in reading it. |
Sherath chapter 31 . 4/24 Honestly, one of THE BEST Percy Jackson and Heroes of Olympus fan fictions out there! Hats off to 'A Battle Inside My Heart', the Author of the story, for writing such an amazing story. Really love your work. I know that you last updated on the 24th of Dec 2015 and its now April of 2020 but gurrlll (assuming that you are one) your story will live on forever. Love this story. Keep writing more! |
Vee153 chapter 4 . 7/25/2019 i really like this story so far but... -grammar! -it's not very realistic (for example a stable boy wouldnt eat with the royal family, and percy would not be able to be cheeky when talking to prince cameron. percy would also not be allowed to dance with annabeth or piper, i think, if he was just a commander.) apart from that, it's really good x |
Vee153 chapter 3 . 7/25/2019 grammar! |
Guest chapter 26 . 7/19/2019 NICO DIED! HOW COULD YOU! |
XxAngie unixX chapter 14 . 5/21/2019 “Ouch! Mommy that hurts!Jason grace |
ahmed128 chapter 22 . 5/2/2019 f u |
HamiltonandPercy chapter 4 . 4/16/2019 Please make Luke show up! I ship Thaluke |
Percy chapter 11 . 12/9/2018 Oh...My...Gods... this fanfic is AMAZING! Keep you did very well |
Guest chapter 17 . 12/7/2018 Can you check your grammar and word formation please? It's really frustrating seeing a good story getting ruined by bad grammar. |
AtlanticGirl12 chapter 32 . 8/30/2018 Whatever happened to the story you were going to write ? Olympus Art Online? It sounded promising |
Wise Girl 2.0 chapter 7 . 7/21/2018 Upppdddaaaatttteeee! |
Wise Girl 2.0 chapter 2 . 7/20/2018 Just so you know I am only doing this for the Percabeth moment. So your story is pretty good so far, most stories have crappy beginnings and get better but you had a great start and I can't wait to read the rest! |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/17/2018 Percabeth |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/17/2018 Did annabeth a and Percy have sex |