Oh boy, well, good start.

I don't know why, but I love how you portrayed Loki. I'm sick of him being evil in other fanfics, but he's still the god of mischief, and I think you have a good balance of good and evil.

That last paragraph is pure gold

Yay, Morgan got his family back, great idea Hiccup and fits the plot well

Enjoyed the moment with Astrid and Hiccup, glad Stoick won't be a slave either. Hiccup's confidence is great to finally see

Great battle plan Hiccup, and I agree with Astrid that he did bring both of the types of peace. People only fought because he made the effort, gave them a common enemy, and was a great guy

Those are horrible terms, gah. I wish I knew all parts of his crazy plan

Still love the triplets, great boys. And the line "Only Astrid can hit me", so awesome!

Loki and Hiccup, a strange pair but they do fit together as a weird unstoppable team

His crazy plans always come through!

Like the insight into the queen

Hiccup is on with his plan, he just needs to get some self worth

Wow, major surprises there but fitting with Astrid's nature

Love how the wisps came into play, can't wait for Hiccup to finally fight back on his terms and get his reputation back! It's been too much suffering

Like how the triplets saved the day sorta and a common enemy can do wonders for a fighting force