Great work again

This is a good story, but it has several spelling errors of Harry Potter-specific words (i.e. "floo" being spelled as "floe", or "Gryffindor" as griffendor), homonym errors, and lack of dialogue in a character rich world.

This was great!

Enjoyed the story is rather good.
But killing dumblefuck like that is a downer, sjeesh harry should have killed him way before that. And unbelievable that ron is in staff before leaving school and not also being killed or kicked out of school long before?

Fun storyline. Grammar and timeline are a little dodgy, but still worth the read.

I am not very impressed with this story.
Sorry, but the story it just a little bit too confusing.

Well, I liked it for the most part, but had to reread many things as sometimes the way things were written was too confusing.

This one is good thanks

You know, checking your spelling isn't that hard and there is , I am told, a wiki full of correct HP spellings.
Fun little story.

bonne fic!

Despite your disclaimer about your grammer, on the whole it was ok; I've seen worse. But what I have /never/ seen is so much confusion between first-person and third-person. Switching them between paragraphs was bad enough, switching them within a single sentence? Here's one example:

I 'faded' with his girls to the Island.

WUT?

I stuck with it because I am a hardcore HHr shipper plus I hate Dumbles and wanted to see what you would do to him... but then he just died in a raid? WTF! That's not satisfying at all!

So I stopped reading at that point.

I always figured Satan would kick Voldemort's ass, and you proved me right! Great story!

Wow.

This Harry shows absolutely no pity!

I LIKE!

I am disgusted with the poor spelling in this story! The most frequent are: Floo, Aurors, Apparate, Expecto Patronum. What really got me is that instead of the 'Daily Prophet' you write it as 'Daily Profit'! Are we reading a wizarding financial paper? No! If you would go back over this story and make corrections, I would be more than happy to read this. Why didn't you even proofread or have someone check out your spelling before you posted? If you want educated people to read your stories, at least be kind enough not to insult anyone's intelligence by submitting such shoddy work! I would also think that if you had read the Harry Potter books, you would know the proper spelling of the words used in the Harry Potter world! I am very disappointed as I had looked forward to reading this story.

So when he met up with the wrath of Riddle NO How about "So when he met up with the wraith of Riddle"?
The story is good but spelling and grammar suck