Reviews for Instability |
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![]() ![]() ![]() When is the next chapter coming out? I want to know what happens next. Just curious no pressure. |
![]() ![]() Author-San, please update, I really really want to know what happens next... Onegai! |
![]() ![]() Hi. It has been like years since you stop update. Of course, me and my sister both read your stories has a question in mind, "Are you going to discontinue?" I really hope not. In Katekyo Hitman Reborn, your story is the very first story I've ever read. Since I like Hibari and all... Though of course there's some parts I don't like. Like how Alice is behaving around others, or how everyone ignore her... I also doesn't like Alice killing Yuu too. Since I also kinda like Yuu. I hope you're not angry after reading this, I thought about giving up hope of your story because you haven't on for a while. But I couldn't because every time I read other stories of KHR or re-watching KHR, I would think about your story. So, I guess I just couldn't give up hope. :) Oh, and I'm really excited that you're gonna do the Future ARC cause most of the authors are too lazy to continue... I couldn't help but wonder if future Hibari has confess to Alice... XD... I almost forgot. I saw your DeviantArt just now, and I can't find any Alice picture nor Yuu's... Have you deleted them? Just asking, 'cause I wanna know what they look like. I hope you will update sooner, I really look forward into it. I guess that's all. Bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! You finally upload a new chapter. Sorry for reading it late. You know that my phone has some problem. When the author upload a new story or a new chapter, it won't alert you. So I decide to check on myself. And so, you upload one! And I totally love it. About Yuu.. I still don't know much about him. He was strange and I was quite curious when you say that he died because of a reason. I've wondering it quite a while but still didn't get an answer. And also maybe he has relationship with Mukuro in some place with Alice, together. He's so mysterious. I heard that your mouse had a funny problem. That's where I see from deviantart. I decide to check what Alice looks like but I didn't have any clue. Is it okay already? Anyway, I asked my father about it. He said that maybe you should try changing the mouse or ask the workers to cure your mouse problem. So I thought that maybe you won't be uploading any chapters and I was sad. And I was also afraid that you would stop writing any chapters or continuing your story. Because every good story will be discontinue after writing it until half way. I read your 'Hunted' story long ago. And I was wondering if there was another chapter of it. Because it looks like it have and it doesn't too. I just wanna confirm It, hope you don't mind. AND, I love your story so much. Your story was the first one I read since I know fanfiction, the website. And I also hope you make thousand of stories and keep on upload chapters. Because when I always re-read your story it and when I don't see a new chapter, it makes me sad. And I somehow memorize it.. A little. So I really do hope that you would keep on up load chapters so I won't get bored and PLEASE don't discontinue It! THANKS A LOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite part would probably be when TYL!Hibari was looking after Alice X3 |
![]() ![]() I really hope that you will post the future arc, because I know it will turn out interesting. And I will be so exiting, and I want you to post it now, I mean like right now. But oh well, I really do hope you post a new chapter of the future arc. I am so exiting! Sorry that I'm disturbing you... |
![]() ![]() ![]() si por fin el arco del futuro actualiza pronto quiero ver como se desarrolla la relacion de alice y hibari por cierto debido a las caracteristicas de su anillo alice va a ser una usuario de multiples llamas o no? y cuando este en el futuro sera capaz de recordar cosas de su pasado? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is SOOOOO COOL! Please continue! Ah! I'm so excited! Please upload a new chapter! Please:D |
![]() ![]() GO! FUTURE ARC! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... All I understood in this chapter was... Alice: RARRR! *Clink clink Clang Clang (Fighting)* Yak Yak Yak. Effing Bel *Gasp Gasp* *SQuirt Squirt blood* Stupid Bel. Yak yak Yak. Mammon. Bel. Illusions. Xanxus. Hibari. Blood. Blood. Debt. Talk talk. That was all I Understood. :D, My brain sucks after exams... |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww X3 XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you please update a new chapter? I'm so so so so so so so looking forward to it! |
![]() ![]() She's too O.P |
![]() ![]() Hey... When can u upload a new chapter? I have been waiting for a long time and it already about a month... Juz hope u upload it quicker please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEEEES! FINALLY AN UPDATE! |