Reviews for Lunar Phases |
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Bigou chapter 6 . 5/20/2019 That was a nice story so far, I would like to read more of it if you didn't abandon it totally. |
Cashne chapter 6 . 12/25/2016 This was a lot of fun. If only it wasn't abandoned |
Kitten Arina chapter 2 . 1/21/2016 I am sorry but I am so lost you would think that this would have continued from the prologue but they just don't seem nor do they feel connected in any form. |
Ozzallos chapter 6 . 12/12/2015 Hey, just on how I've been enjoying a lot of your fics, not just this one. I like your portrayal of crystal tokyo and the retention of some old world districts. It's not something you see a lot of in the genre. One thing I'm noting with this last chapter is that Ranma is telling about her history... Which would make Chibi-Usa a very bad mother because she's being implicated as being responsible for all the crap Ranma went through. It was worth a giggle in my mind, at least. Anyway, your fics tend to follow WAFF, and are done well. Makes me want to write more waffy fics, but my plate is full and the few I have will have to suffice. Keep writing! |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/25/2015 This was cute! I love the relationship between Usagi and Ranma. I hope you right more soon. |
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 7/11/2015 Good two chapters of course |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/13/2015 Why would a guy possibly want to just give being a girl a chance? That's such a joke. I mean if you want Ranmachan fine but to make it believable you need to have something force him into such as his curse being locked or some other similar reason. |
SoulboundAlchemist chapter 6 . 1/11/2015 FINALLY! A good Ranma/SM fic that isn't dead! HURRAY! Please update soon! |
Shannon Dee chapter 6 . 12/10/2014 An enjoyable story that I am looking forward to more of. |
itsfluffee chapter 6 . 12/8/2014 Enjoying this story, hope there is more to come soon! |
Ferdiad chapter 6 . 11/13/2014 How is Ranmas strength/conditioning in this body. Will he have to go though the trouble of retraining his muscle memory and stuff like callouses? |
Ferdiad chapter 4 . 11/12/2014 I hope im not investing my time into this so it becomes a crying woe is me "ranma had a cruel life" wank-fest. You have a high standard of writing compared to most works in the fandom, the drama/hurt tags worry me though. |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/1/2014 What about the mlpxranma story were did that go |
Dumbledork chapter 6 . 11/1/2014 I'm really happy to see you working on this story. It really is a lot of fun to read. |
Drac-frst chapter 3 . 10/31/2014 The end dialogue here seems a bit mixed up - Usagi suggested adopting Ranma, right? yet at the end Usagi says "At first the suggestion that she pretend to be your [Usako's] daughter bothered me" it seems like it makes the most sense if I switch around Usagi and Usako's names there. Especially since Usagi talks about making Ranma look like Usako's husband later in that same paragraph. (Considering that Usako both looks like she's 9 and isn't married in cannon.) |