great story

Well both Tanya and Avery have a reason to hate Edward. Hopefully he can control himself around Carlise when he meets him

I really liked it, a beautiful story

Edward makes me sick
He does deserve to die.
How bad is it

damn Edward what he tried
and Esme shouldn't insult her

What a son of a bitch is this Edward, if he deserves to die

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Okay is Esme going senile in her old vampire age, because WHY does she ASSUME that Avery is 'human'? Especially after what HE is 'human' especially after what HE did to HER just the other day in his rage? *lol* even she has to realize that 'human' comment is STUPID when it comes to Avery, because if he was a mere human was able to hold her down AND hurt her while doing it. Plus seeing how FAST she must have seen him move before he was on top of her before she realized what was going on, hes still obviously not a normal 'human' if he has the speed and strength of a vampire. *lol*

Interesting...

poor written plot

Awesome story, so far! Love it!

Really?

Maybe he will ask to help destroy Eddie and Alice after he finds out the Peter and Char won't be in the story.

Wonder what attitude Rose will have, will she be her normal bitch? will Emmett run up and try to hug Bella like the idiot he always acts?

Could be written a little bit better,but it is still a good the fairy boy has been gone for two years i wonder how many girls he has raped or eaten?