Falsity Alert! Falsity Alert! Falsity Alert! Falsity Alert! Falsity Alert! Falsity Alert!
You are not permitted to change Harry's first name!

almost all the stories on HP and SGA are unappreciated and I'm sorry, I was quite curious about your subject, but also endless

You better of abandoned this story. As the percentile of Alteran Magi that believed in Harry's course is far, far, far to low. I had expected that an extra ten percent had followed Harry through the gate. Wich means that out of 200,000 being stripped there must be 20,000 living in Atlantis.

This is a great story. I see you have not updated it for 3 years and hope you will at some point :)

Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!

Great story, I hope you will finish it someday

Please update! I love your story!

I was hoping it would be Harry/Shepard and Neville/Mckay. Just making harry have random bed partners until he met Shepard.

awesome i want more :D

More please.

:( This story looks unique and really promising... I wish you would continue it!

Well- this is great and all, but there's been no update! Is there any chance of this story proceeding? And just as a quick question: how did the magically inclined GET to Atlantis?

What you wrote about slash should be put in the summary. Obviously you can expect hate when you waste someones time. Sure, "it doesn't take long to read the first paragraphs" - But when you read several stories a day it adds up. You are part of the many, many hours me and many others have wasted this way on a site without a sorting system where you instead of being able to not check a box removing all slash finds yourself upon this kind of thing instead. Yes, it makes you and your ilk into bad persons without respect for your fellow readers and writers.

And people wonder why I never post my stories here...
So yeah, shame on you.

to bad you dumped the old story i liked it and this story is more of a new story then a rewrite unless this is where the other story whould end up later

Hi, just wanted to let you know this story is coming along great. I haven't read the original, so I don't know any of the differences; and in the beginning I was a little "...huh? What's going on here?" but the explanation for the SGC guys went really well and cleared things up beautifully.

Just one comment I might make - when Harry is introduced to the SGC he's the only one, so you know who he is [HP fans might guess the rest from the descriptions] as well as his High Counsilor position, but you don't actually include an introduction for the others where the reader can 'observe' [if that makes sense?]. You might consider just adding that, even though we eventually see who Neville and Luna are and what their Alteran positions are, we don't actually learn Hermione's through the dialogue.

Hope that helps you! Love the story and look forward to more.