I like it, but please watch your spelling! It's kind of confusing! I do really like the story line.

Hi. I love your story! Its really interesting. I was wondering if you ever going to update. Sorry about this. Its like 2020 and the last time you updated was 2017. So umm sorry for asking.

There are no such things as mistakes, only happy little accidents.

Love this story!

I loved it ad hated it pls let there be more

Quite well done. Been a while so welcome back.

Omg! I simply loved these 16 pages! Please continue the story don't abandon it. Your plot is simply amazing and I love this divergent and POV crossover! You do have a few grammatical mistakes but you'll get over it I know you will cause even I've dealt with criticism regarding my grammar since I'm from India and I usually speak Telugu or Hindi. Pretty please with hot chocolate and sprinkles on the top continue this story

Heroes of Olympus is ama-ZHANG:D

Tori's brother was George not Henry

JUST SPELL TOOK RIGHT

Why is Jason and Thalia so mean to each other? They may be siblings, but still.

Thank you for letting us see the real like. I nearly died when i found out be was a total basterd. When I read the real book of pjato.

First off, I'm EXACTLY like annabeth. Th spider part left me scared to death. I got zero sleep. Why did you have to be so grafic?!

Loved it, but you need to work on spelling. Don't just wiz through it. Take your time. People will like it even better. But absolutely loved it, but I could hardly understand it. Work on grammar and spelling, please and thank you.

Loved it, but try commas. They'll help. I could hardly understand it. But I love what I could understand!