i think this them getting interrupted thing is getting too old

I wish things had gone a lot more smoother with Kaito, he seemed os cute and seemed to have so much chemistry with sakura. Also, Sasuke should have called Naruto out on his behavior. It wasn't appropriate for him to go after sakura, a grown woman- they weren't dating- that is crossing a line!

I am just going to POLITELY IGNORE who you've paired Ino with. LMAO instesad Ima imagine Sasuke and her have a really nice thing going on .

Literally everything about this is perfect exept the InoCho part. I am such a strong InoShika shipper that this thing in the middle completely threw me off.

And I rellly want Sasuke to be he one to call Sakura on her feelings. That would make for such a nice scene

I love this . i am so looking forward to it. your characterization of her is so real. this is what i would have imagined her to feel around naruto if she discovered she was attracted to him. I know you used the word brother for sasuke but i wonder if you'll explore her feelings for him as well, just so she herself gets clarity

Man you gotta keep writing this, its so damn good

Ohmygooodds I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! they’re SO adorable together! I really love the timeline as well, i LOVE naruto look in The Last, so thats what i imagine he looks like when i read this story. thank you so much for the story! you’re SO talented!:)

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I really wish you continue this fic. I'm a hard narusaku shipper and this is a very good one! Don't listen to those crappy bastards who insult. I know it's hurts like hell, it can broke your heart as I know how much hard work is needed to produce something as good as your story. Thank you so much for the time you gave us to create this.

You're great! I love when I can be all alone to read good stuff like this, to be able to plainly giggle, roll over myself, squeek in delight and gasp openly as I read those delicious word. I love how you make everything so lovely, those details and small jokes you place here and there like sasuke grinding the small rock in victory as uchiha don't kick stone in frustration. I love team seven interaction. Your uchiha is so cute, a broken inner child hiding behind a mask he wear for so long. I kind of imagine him like that too, but I can't depict him as well as you.
Thank you for your hard work!

Love it! Love it! Love it! I love how you portrayed them. I love your writing. So great!

For your first fic I have to say I love it. Please write more. Write! Write! Write until you begin to breathe words! I a fellow apprentice writer, I can say that I envy you to be so great! I love your work! Thank you for sharing it!

Oh god! I love your story!

I love NaruSaku a lot. please write more because i need more.

I absolutely love your work and I hope that I get to see the ending soon ️ Take your time!

Understood about life, you have to live it. I'm sorry about the deaths in the family, it's been a year so I hope you are alright. Hope this gets finished someday, other than that it will forever in my favs list. Thanks :)