Reviews for Chaotic Space
nihongogakusei chapter 31 . 7/6
Read this some time ago. Glad I can give a good review for it.
Tactical-Magician chapter 1 . 7/1
This story deserves more attention.
Protocutural Blasphemy chapter 31 . 4/28
This story has given me hope that my childhood has not yet fully disappeared, thank you for blessing us all with your creative wisdom.
Protocutural Blasphemy chapter 28 . 4/26
Thank you so much for making this story, I have been binging this for the past few days and I will be the first to admit, this is by far the most well thought out and interesting Robotech story that I have found, honestly anywhere. So please keep up the good work and remember that no matter what some trolls say, you writers are gods to us.
mongodatroll chapter 31 . 7/4/2019
Just finished this, and really enjoyed it for the most part. You had a few bits of either bad grammar or rebellious spell checker here and there, and more than a few places where it was obvious that in your cutting and pasting you had fouled up somewhere, as there were duplicated words and such in strange parts of the sentence.
But then, we ain't pro's here and I know that my writing is infested with a lot of the same garbage, so please don't take it personally. Just making an observation.
That all said, and I freely admit that this might well be a function of my own personal bias/preference, but I vastly preferred the first ninety percent or so of this. About the time the fight scenes became rattled of statistics of ship designations and the numbers that had just folded in, died, folded out, whatever, I found myself skipping a lot trying to get back to the characters whose story actually mattered to me. The fact that this was almost the entirety of the last chapter really left a bit of a bad aftertaste, If I am being honest.
That all said, I don't bother to type up reviews for things I don't like, and I don't bother to take the time reading things this long if I don't find them interesting enough to hold my attention.
Thank you for your efforts, they are most appreciated. :)
Ilireanwri chapter 31 . 11/16/2018
A very good story (which I must admit I only started to read because I was bored as I didn't know Robotech... but once I started I couldn't stop). You did mix Ranma and Robotech very well.
It would be nice if you would introduce the other races in the sequel. In fact, from what I read about her I think the Regiss would get along well with Cologne (I can't get that picture out of my head of those two sitting down and starting a conversation about Ki and the Flowers of Life that makes everyones head spin while Dr. Lane sits on the side, giddy like a kid on Christmas, taking notes and muttering how fascinating all this is), or at least her being willing to not attack the others as long as she gets some Flowers back to make sure her people survive.
Ilireanwri chapter 28 . 11/16/2018
Wait a sec, Retsuc is the reverse of Custer, like this Cavallerie General who got himself and his men killed by underestimating his foes and attacking them despite being wastly outnumbered... Did you name him like this on purpose or was it just a coincidence?
pwtcmcneil chapter 2 . 11/1/2018
would'ah been funny if it was unsc instead of unsf
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2018
I think you have a spelling error here and there or every where, “marital” should be “martial”.
Blaze1992 chapter 31 . 7/4/2018
Okay I am very surprised to see a lengthy kicka** story of robotech though still sad at seeing so much of earth and it's people destroyed.

I liked the AU events and the various tech not native to robotech being used and humans being fair better, also thank you for nerfing the power of "music".

But I will admit there were some parts I didn't like.

All in all a very good fic wish it was longer.
Blaze1992 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
So basically the entire plot of the ranma but with some twist's happened before robotech plot started?
Zekuran chapter 31 . 5/6/2018
I honestly can't get over just how good your writing is. I usually don't reread a story, and this is the fifth or sixth time I've read this one. Your easily one of the best authors on this site.
Ariadne Venegas chapter 31 . 4/19/2018
But Chile has a lot of big bunkers! Made but Pinochet the tyrant, the german nazy colony and in the north for several rich people fearing the apocalipse. Also in Robothec 3 the story occur in Chile, Argentina, and Peru so sure thing they survive, also Chile have people in the Antartida and the Andes? I know the extreme south sure thing is wiped out because of tsunamis but more than half the country must be in good condition specially since we have another mountain cordon in the coast from the half of the country and up, so no tsunamis. I think, thas why the third part of Robothec part in Chile.
Kithrin chapter 12 . 4/6/2018
question, why would cutting perhaps 10 minutes out, by removing 1 contestant make THAT much of a difference? especially since the organizers shouldn't have ACCEPTED the application in the first place.
Centaurious chapter 9 . 3/3/2017
(see new portions of the prologue when I add them, a flashback would not do the scene where he made this oath justice)

Thanks for putting this in the middle of a dramatic scene. It broke me out of my non-stop reading of your story. I'll need to go back and finish this chapter after I go get groceries, walk the dog, clean the gutters, etc, etc. so I'll probably get back to your story around mid July.
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