I’ve spent the last few days reading this and the last few chapters have been my favourite! I’m a J/S shipper but also love the C/P storyline. Following now for the wedding scene and happily ever after. I’d love to see Jacob get the SGC command job now Jack’s promoted!

Really enjoying this story

You can't do this! I thought you killed Carter. I was starting to feel sick and had to stop reading, then force myself to go on because you couldn't possibly let her be dead. Great writing. One of the best fanfics.

Child #3 is certainly more of a priority than this story! But when things calm down would love to see more.

Love

I like how Heimdall was retrieved by Jack. That was pretty slick and Jack's right they do owe him

I like how you develop the other characters a particularly Jonas I really did like him I mean I miss Daniel of course but it's interesting to have Jonas back in the scheme of things. I also like how you've involved Jack and Sam further without necessarily Crossing Lines.

It's interesting to see Woolsey in this role because it does seem like it could have been him like this in terms of behavior. For sure Kinsey would definitely hold up everyone if he even suspected improper Behavior between two officers. I just can't wait to hear how Janet's doing!

Good job. Wondering if in the next chapter you give us details as to what transpired after the fact I have a feeling I may be disappointed but it still is very good

Definitely like how Emmett Bergman is portrayed. I think it was pretty sneaky though to eavesdrop on the other officers in the Gear Up Room. But I also like Jack's response about should he go Kick-Ass? I like how Jack preface it though with the fact that he knew that Sam could do it herself to confidence love it!

All pysched up and nowhere to go... You like cliffies don'you?

I really liked the take with Pete and Jack and Sam and I also liked Teal'c and Jonas. I'm definitely not a Pete fan by a long shot but I do like what you've done with the story so far in fact better than how they handled Pete in the series.

Oh I love this development with the Asgard and the changes that they seem to have brought about for Jack this is good I can just see him kind of grumpily dealing with the situation and wondering how it was going to change him with Sam. Good plot and dialogue. I can see them both thinking, and saying those exact words. You have their voices down.

I just found this story and I am totally into it already I am looking forward to reading the rest and anything with a little Sam and Jack is always going to be good I like the danger aspect especially

I love the scientific accuracy in this chapter.