Pretty good

Not epic

That ending was so friging cute. My god this was well written.

IVE NEVER READ A FAN FIC THIS GOOD! Please make another one!

NON CON NESS X PORKY FTW

I love this story, it's nice and cute and funny though other than the constant skip change and little detail I liked it. The talk though, oh god XD

This fic was so intense and sad, yet the part that stands out most to me is the part where Kumatora and Duster attempt to give Lucas The Talk.

I love fics where the Masked Man realizes who he is so quickly. I absolutely love it. Thank you for allowing the world to see your wonderful writing.

Poor Ness, though. Poor boy.

Really loved this story! Great plot and great dialog

Notice how Master Hand conveniently left out the fact that Porky would be one of the bosses. I'm a little confused on how Ness grew to love Lucas while all of this was going on. Bonding through telepathy? Yeah, probably.

this should have happend dammit!

"Have any tips?" "Pray a crap-ton of times." Lol! But seriously, this is great. Porky is a little... I mean a LOT unnerving, but when is he not? This... I cannot describe it.

Please continue this!

Oh Please! Do a sequel of this story! You're a great writter for do this... I love everything (umm.. except the rape but anyways)... Please I beg you to do the sequel! You can't just leave us in this way! Take care of yourself and I hope I can read you soon

This was a nice story and a great ending. I hope Lucas stays in Smash Bros. Anyway the twist and turns of the story were done pretty well despite only being one chapter. I can only imagine how great this would be in multiple chapters. A good caption of the games. And an excellent nail bitter.

wow...it gave me sickning shivers, but the end made me smile. Great job hope to see more

You should so write a sequel in the SSB category and make Claus an assist trophy too.