Reviews for Beggin' |
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![]() ![]() 3 re-read. WORTH IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this before a while ago (apparently while on my phone as I must not have been logged in) and didn't review as I intended to. Shame on me. Lovely work. You understood the characters and that came through. I in particular giggled at the powertrip ever so present during their sexytimes. That is so them and if it ever happened, those two would easily spend more time trying to dominate each other than anything else. Also Harvey trying to mark her and stake his claim. The epitome of Harvey job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg yes! This was wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() YASSSSSSSS TO THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's pretty freakin' hot...wow |
![]() ![]() Intense story. Nicely written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did slow clap and then passed out that's how good this was lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING, HOTT, HOTT! Jarvey these two have such an intense wordplay and relationship that I believe that you have truly captured that a lovemaking session between these two would be intense...damn I was totally engrossed and fanning myself hahaha. Definitely Harvey got what he wanted :) Enjoyed the great read very much and hopefully you are able to write another Jarvey sometime soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! The moment I was anxiously waiting for! As usual you have delivered! |