So, this was a fun story to read.

First few chapters had me worried, since it was very similar to another story I had read before, but thankfully, you took it into an entirely different direction.

I am also pleased with the harem so far. I know a few chapters back you asked if any of the Konoha group should be added to Naruto's harem, in which I have to say, Yes to Kurenai joining. I also wouldn't mind seeing if Anko could sneak in, as she is without a doubt my favorite of the Konoha girls. Tenten is also another favorable choice for me.

Sadly, it seems this story hasn't seen an update in over 6 years, which is kind of discouraging. But, I will still follow and favorite in hopes that you will return and continue this.

...actually, where Naruto is from the word “master” usually applies to the master of an apprentice, an art or skill, a liege, or a wealthy employer. It’s not considered negative at all.

More please this is so good

Thank you another Anti Naru/Hina writer. That pairing should have never happened.

Love this story I hope it gets updated!

Yes Kurenai Samui temari and others

Most of these harem girls are unnecessary they don't hold much meaning to their relationship with Naruto. You don't give the characters much dialogue, the lemon and fight scene are too short.

This just got too confusing. First off, you're saying Naruto isn't Kushina's child but Tsunade's and the reason why the village wants him back is for his genes to create super shinobi. Even this is a fanfiction there's too many holes in that scene to make any sense. Also I don't like the thought that you made Hinata and Iruka turn their back on Naruto, it doesn't sit well me.

This is just a question but are you going to finish this story? I like it and think it's a good one.

This is really good hope you continue it soon.

How about: Run, Sakura, Tayuya, Hana, and Hanabi.

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.

good story please write more chapters as soon as you can.

Will this be updated

are you alive?!