Reviews for This is How a Heart Breaks
Guest chapter 2 . 12/19/2019
After Nicole and Dana have had their arms crossed over their chests and not looking at each other unless it's always glaring at each other, not talking to each other, either, unless it's always bickering or not even apologizing to each other. "Miss Bristow, Miss Cruz, what you two did was unacceptable. I'm very disappointed in the both of your behaviors. Both of you apologize to each other." But Nicole and Dana still refused to apologize to each other and stormed off in opposite directions.

Dana: (angrily storms far away from Nicole) Ooohhh, I hate her. I can't stand her.

Nicole: (angrily storms in another direction away from Dana) Ugh, I hate her. I can't stand her.

"Miss Bristow, you used violence in school. Miss Cruz, you could have seriously hurt someone! Both your behaviors have shamed yourselves. Nicole, Dana, you're punishments will be this. You're both hereby expelled from PCA. Miss Bristow, you're going to all girls only boarding school because of your Obsessive Male Gender Disorder. Miss Cruz, you will take anger management classes in another, different boarding school because your rage is out of control." The angry, horrified looks on Nicole's and Dana's faces. "What?" "The choice is final. Have I made myself clear?" Dana and Nicole grumbled under their breaths in disgust, still refusing to look at each other. "Yes, ma'am!"
VioJim chapter 3 . 5/16/2019
It's amazing how much framing the story around this one relationship made the wacky events and behaviors (of Logan in particular) in the show more realistic. Still pretty unbelievable, but wow.
Jaylin chapter 5 . 4/2/2019
Is there any chance you’re updating this story?
Callmemaddy chapter 2 . 3/5/2019
Here we go... It was the last day at PCA. There wasn't many rules at PCA. No girls in guy's rooms after eight, don't do drugs on campus, and if you fail a class, you have to have a parent-teacher conference. Now, if you fail five classes...you had a problem. Nicole Bristow sat in Dean River's office, waiting for her turn to walk the plank. Her mom hurried into the room, fumbling around some papers. Dean Rivers walked though the door, "Nicole Bristow." "This better be important," Mrs. Bristow warned, "I am losing dollars by the second." Her cell phone started ringing, "NO! I SAID BUY, NOT SELL!" "Mom..." Nicole was embarrassed. Dean Rivers chuckled, "Come in, Nicole and Mom." Her mom glared and hung up the phone, "I swear my assistant can never do anything right. She is so getting fired when I get back." Nicole looked uncomfortable. Dean Rivers cleared his throat, "I guess we should get to the meeting." "Yeah, yeah, what has my little Nicole done now?" Mrs. Bristow laughed. "Well," Mr. Rivers opened his filing cabinet, "I'll let you look for yourself." He put Nicole's report card in front of her face.
PCA STUDENT GRADES SEMESTER REPORT
Name: Nicole Anne Bristow Grade: 9 Homeroom: Bender Room: 101
Geometry...D-
English 1...C
Chemistry...F
P.E...D
Art...B
Spanish 1...F
"Well?" Dean Rivers asked.
Mrs. Bristow didn't anything. Dean Rivers tapped her, "Mrs. Bristow?" Mrs. Bristow was startled and thrown something up in the air. It was her phone, "Mom! Were you texting again?" Her mother defended, "Bunny, mommy is going to lose a lot of money if I don't get this fixed..." Dean Rivers responded, "Don't worry, we are almost done. I just wanted to ask if we could have Nicole talk to our school counselor, so she can do better next year." "What?" Mrs. Bristow asked, not paying attention, "Yeah, sure whatever..." - For the next four weeks, half of her summer, she went to the counselor for three hours, every day. They kept telling her only one more week, but then kept extending that.
Mrs. Devop-School Counselor–Patient Log
Day 1-Patient 5023 (AKA Nicole Bristow)
Patient 5023 tells me about her life at PCA. She is really close to her roommates, esp. roommate Zoey Brooks. Says she likes a boy named Jerry. Said boy is in her Geometry, English, and Chemistry classes. Goes on about the color pink.
Day 7-Patient 5023
5032 comes in crying about a boy. I asked if it was Jerry. She responds angrily saying, "Jerry was so yesterday! WHY ARE YOU SO STUPID?"
Day 23-Patient 5023
Patient said she likes boy named Ben. Goes on for a half an hour about his beautiful skin/hair.
Day 56-Patient 5023
Talks for the whole three hours about why English accents are hot. She writes me a list with 23 reasons (attached).
Conclusion
Patient 5023 has been a hard case to crack. Said patient has a rare disorder called OMGD. Discovered by Clay Aiken, who also was secretly diagnosed with the disorder, 1 of every 60237 has OMGD. OMGD is dangerous towards one's self. It is a proven statistic that 73 percent of those that have OMGD end up in prostitution. I advise a Parent Meeting to discuss Nicole's disease.
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When Nicole's mom was called to a meeting, she didn't have any idea why. Nicole shrugged. Mrs. Bristow was annoyed that she had to miss a day of work. Can somebody say WORKAHOLIC? "This better be important!" she mumbled. The two went down to the meeting to have a talk with Mrs. Devop, Dean Rivers, and Nicole's teachers. The meeting was rather boring, so Nicole tuned out and thought of this hot guy she walked by. "She has OMGD," Devop revealed. "English?" Dean Rivers asked. Devop sighed and explained the disorder, including the stats. Nicole was still tuning out. HE WAS SO HOT. Time went by and the adults talked some more. "What do you suggest?" Mrs. Bristow asked. "In all the cases I reviewed, they all do the same things. Send the girl to the an all girls boarding school..." The school counselor replied. Nicole heard that in tuned back in, "You mean, like, no boys?"
"Exactly," She responded, "You need to get over your obsession and it's the only way..." Mrs. Bristow said, "Really? That's all I needed to say? Do whatever you want and let me go back to work." "MOM!" Nicole protested, "I don't want to change schools, especially one without BOYS!" "Babe, you have to do what is best..." Nicole couldn't believe her mom. Why wasn't she sticking us for her? She just wanted to get back to work. Some mom. "I HATE YOU!" Nicole stormed out.
Nicole sobbed and sobbed for days, but she didn't have a prayer. The deal was set in stone. But just because it was, doesn't mean she has to except it. Nicole was furious and fought all summer. But when she got there, although she missed Zoey and the rest, she was, surprisingly happy...
StephieMarie23 chapter 5 . 2/7/2019
Please update more it’s so good
Zoey 101 Pilot chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
The girls, Zoey and Nicole walked from the bathroom and back to their room. In their room, they've first seen another girl with wavy brown hair.
Valmed chapter 5 . 6/29/2018
I loved it! Great story. I can't wait to read next chapter. I need to know what's happening between Logan and his father.
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 5 . 3/8/2018
Yeah, I can grow to not like Zoey with the way she's acting.
Charlie-Rose94 chapter 5 . 3/6/2018
Great chapter, nice to read this story again!
Iggynator chapter 5 . 3/5/2018
I'm proud of you girl! I love this and can't wait more. Love you, you know that
Zoey Charlotte Baston chapter 5 . 3/5/2018
I discovered this fic last year and I literally fell in love with it. Seeing this update I burst into tears. Can I marry you?
KishuMai chapter 4 . 9/5/2015
Gosh! You made me cry! :D they are so sweet and cute and heartbreaking together...i can't take it xD I need more if this. much,much,much,much more! pwease tell me there will be more! *hopeful eyes*
Raven chapter 4 . 7/24/2015
Oh my god, I never thought people still shipped these two! And in 2015! I love this show, it's the best kids show ever! It's way more mature than family shows now, and there actual romances that don't always work. I love this story, it is so good. I seriously can't wait for the next update!
jaytheraven chapter 4 . 6/18/2015
Yaaaaaay! They got back together!
mourningandsadness chapter 4 . 6/13/2015
LOVED this story :D Perfect end
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