Wow! Another amazing adventure from you. I so enjoyed reading your fic. Please write more Shizaya fics. They are SO my favorite! Thanks for sharing once again.

woahhh that was really good~ love it! I don't read fics in first person pov, cause it's kinda awkward to me, but you wrote it so well that I didn't feel that. awesome job~ and the relationship development and ending was sooo sweet and nice. feelsgoodman TT

I really thought the entire story was so endearing. You really kept these 2 in character and I loved the slow build of the 2 of them falling in love. It really felt natural and was a smooth transition. The only thing I was kinda "eh" about was the ending fight with the Yakuza. I honestly don't even think Shizuo could take them down. And I think they'd be a lot better shots. But overall, it was still a great read. (:

Subarashii~ hehehe

Oh my God, where do I even start?
This was so fantastic. It was so...wow. Like, you kept all the characters in character, while having some unbelievably fluffy moments. And I love how it wasn't all super fast and overly loving and just over the top, but JUST RIGHT. Shizuo and Izaya got together just the way I imagined them too. This has given me so much inspiration to update my shizaya fics...which I will promptly do, before my readers kill me :P The one thing I didn't like is that it ENDED SO DAMN FAST! I seriously needed like, two or three more chapters, but I'll just settle on rereading this.
Stay awesome!

This is asdkdjdidngjfnrkxlshs beautiful

I liked this fic a lot. It was great as the Shizuo's thoughts were evolving over the chapters until he realized that Izaya wasn't what he thought completely.

Squel! I loved that thank you for writing that story it took my mind of everything while thinking about it. Five stars my love!

I love it! Iloveitiloveitiloveit! The plot is good, and the characters are completely IC. I like how you didn't do that thing that a lot of other shizaya fics do where one moment they hate each other, the next they are in love. There was actual progression. Hmm... I wouldn't have minded more detail in the sex scene. Overall though, i LOVE it!

That was a seriously amazing ending.

I'm re-reading the whole story again. Love.

This was so cute!

I must say I really love it. Both were in characters and thats so rear.
One of my favourites for sure from now on. Thank u so much. It was trully wonderful read.
Hope you write a lot of Shizaya in the future. C:

Awww. Cuteee.
Shizuo you adorable little thing. Holding hands must make them happy, ne? (Me too C: )

Perfection. I love it so much till now C: