Please finish!

To the guest reviewer below, not that I expect you to see this since your type tend to post and run, how sad your life must be that you need to go out of your way to find people to bully in an attempt to overcome your feelings of inferiority.

It takes a great deal of skill to create, and even more courage to share what you've created with others. That is exactly what this writer has done, and I applaud anyone who has the fearlessness it takes to publicly share their vision. I can see that you envy her courage since you aren't even brave enough to sign your name to your pointless flame. Instead of projecting your inadequacies on others, I suggest that you find something that will foster your self-esteem in a more productive manner.

You need a fucking good kicking love! You are a fucking weirdo that's why no-one likes you. The imbeciles who write here aren't your fucking friends either. You should go jump off the nearest bridge but you don't have the guts to do it. You would rather just sit there and attention seek by writing shit stories blaming everyone but your sad fat self. Get off your fat ass and grow up. Yada Yada Yada.

I absolutely love this story. Please continue writing. It has been so long since you have updated. I look forward to the next chapter..
Than you for your talent :-)

Please update x

I feel bed for Emmett. Jasper clearly abused his position. Esme is one big bad Mama and is not one to be messed with. She certainly dealt with her children's misbehavior harshly. Carlisle and Esme should buy stock in a furniture store the way their kids destroy everything. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

It's been more than a year since you updated, come on, you're the best writer in the world,update update update, I've waited for the next chapter for a whole year already, come on update please!

Ummmmm so hey! I know you haven't updated this story in quite a while but it's really really good and I think you should finish it! I love your stories sooooooooooo much! And (as bad as it is) I like it when Jasper loses his temper and gets mad at Carlisle... Although it might involve a visit to the bathroom for some soap (that would be a funny chapter). So anyways, I don't know if you are ever planning on updating this story but I just thought you should know that it isn't forgotten! Thanks! Can't wait for some more stories!

You are missing a cullen. Were is Edward cause we all know he's somewere doing something he an't supose to be doing.

You shape stories so well! Come on, I've been looking forward to the next chapter for half a year already! I can't wait! Keep on up loading!

Another great chapter. I'm glad Jasper and Carlisle talked things out. Please continue!

Another great chapter. I loved the fight with Emmett and Jasper and I really liked how Jasper gently escorted Esme out the door when the fight ensued, because he didn't want her hurt. Keep up the good work!

Great first chapter. I feel bad for poor Jasper. It seems like he has a good butt whipping coming! Keep up the good work!

Good story why haven't you updated... please I really enjoyed it.

Another great chapter and wonderful story! It there's a chapter four please post it soon! Great job!