Reviews for Fine |
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![]() ![]() kudos kudos! |
![]() ![]() Love it love it love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful, and the Jim/bones/Spock friendship at the end was the most beautiful of all of it. Thanks so much for writing out your STID heartbreak in such a wonderful manner! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So beautifully written. I really like this approach to the aftermath of Indo Darkness. It seems a little more realistic, and not so heavy handed as others that i?e read. |
![]() ![]() I don't even know if I can bring myself to finish this, this is absolutely heart wrenching. It's beautifully written (let me stay safe and focus on that) as I'm seeing is a pattern with your stories. I... really can't say a lot else I don't have the words and I'm too busy wiping tears. I'll be back to read the rest later. Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! OhmygoshIlovethemsomuch. Thank you for writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm gonna go have an emotion now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this so, so, much! You have truly captured the meaning of grief and healing beautifully. Best of all we see Kirk's, family, his crew members pain as well. Bravo, thank you for writing and posting. |
![]() ![]() Wow this is so beautiful! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwww! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect- you tackle Jim's guilt, anger, sadness and pain so well that I feel as though you've captured his very essence. I love how you've written Spock and Bones as well. When Bones called Jim his "little brother" I literally squeaked with happiness. The snuggling was such a good ending to your one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. this plot was somehow really condensed and otherwise detailed. well balanced!thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love Spock and Bones telling Jim how much he means to them. Beautiful story! |