| Reviews for Shadows in the Night |
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   bonitalito chapter 17 . 1/11/2018 Oh my. A delighted turn of events... |
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/2/2017 Hey, I'm Batman |
| WonderGirl001 chapter 15 . 6/1/2017 I really like this story :) |
| Miss Luny chapter 16 . 5/9/2017 I love this so much! I can't even handle it! |
| Aiereana chapter 16 . 5/8/2017 Ughhh! I love them. |
| mymymetrocard chapter 15 . 1/18/2017 At last! Is it really only out of guilt though...? Look forward to reading more :-) |
| Anna10473 chapter 1 . 1/1/2017 I just started to read your story and like it so far. |
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 15 . 1/1/2017 Wonderful! Update immediately, please! |
| nayanamahajan7 chapter 14 . 4/5/2016 plz update... I really liked this story.. I have a thing for bad boy doing good things for a girl and I have a huge crush on Cillian Murphy... 3 love your story |
| shade815 chapter 14 . 9/11/2015 I'm really interested in your story and I can't wait for the next chapter |
| MutiaRAWR chapter 14 . 9/2/2015 Glad to see you're back. Really interesting yo see how crane will behave. Now the pressure is on |
| ivegotpurple chapter 13 . 10/15/2014 I've been reading through several of your stories the past week by accident. I've been on a Cillian Murphey bender and you write an aweful lot of stories featuring his characters. I only recently realized that they were all by the same author! I enjoy your story lines, they're not stereotypical. I like how you make your OC disapproving of all the evil stuff, instead of accepting or trying to change things. You write well, but one thing I noticed (and frankly it's how I realised all these stories were by the same author) is that you write the dialogue of American characters the way a Brit would speak. You use "brilliant" and "fit" and "bird" among other things, that Americans don't normally say. And whilst, Americans use while. Also, you say "she was sat by the door," but Americans say "she was sitting by the door," and other similar things. I don't think it's important in the body of the story, because it's narration, but in the dialogue, or when writing in first person for an American character, you might want to try to change that. I'm only bringing it up because I figured you didn't realize that it was abnormal for Americans (and Canadians) to speak that way. And that's not so much a criticism as an observation. Overall I really do like your stories, and I would love to read more of this one. I'm curious to see how things with the toxin develop, along with the relationship between Jonathan and Victoria. Please write more soon! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/21/2014 Update please! All of your Crane stories are perfection! |
| Shane.rayne chapter 13 . 8/22/2014 Really hope you continue this I think in general your writing is really thoughtful and smooth to read. Here's to hope |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/21/2014 Maybe you could actually update this. -_- |
