Don't read this story. It will take up hours of your time with mediocre writing, weird teenage angst and incest, so many characters and family it's a joke and 300,000 words longer than nessesary. I appreciate the dedication that must of gone in to writing it, but there is a better fic out there.

Really? Fucking Gryffindor? Sure, cunning people don't announce to the world that they're cunning, but Gryffindor is probably the worst house for this Harry and he also wouldn't want to delude them into thinking he's the Harry Potter they think he is. This is just another example of an author copy pasting canon, changing a few minor details that don't affect the plot and calling it an original work. What's next? Is he going to hate weasley but Ron will just follow him around until the Golden Trio is birthed?

they're throwing their heads back way too much. people don't do it that often.

LOL that twilight reference.
The Twins pranking Cedric is still a better love story.

I don't really know what happend, but after Ch13 the quality just droped a lot. I tried to continue because the premise of the story is quite good, but the drop in quality was just a bit to much to stomach. Still good job so far.

Nice reference to twilight

So Cedric Diggory is like a real life Edward vampire? Quite the prank Weasley twins, quite the prank indeed

I planned to skip lemons as I usually do with HP fics and read you know the story, not porn.
But given the amateurish writting and the descrption of Lily that sums up to D-cup breasts, I dropped this not half a first chapter into the story.

Ewwww really author... Rita of all people... really?

This story is 400k words of nonsense and incoherent rambling. How in the world is your second story in this series over 2 million words?

Oh, I know.

Because you're a dumbass with a word hose.

I like how you made the protections slowly change the Dursleys looks on the outside by the way that they act along with the animals that they act like on the inside.

Action scenes aren't very coherent.

The whole throwing their heads back thing is stupid and used way to often.

Harry fucked his mom and cousins (sweet home Alabama plays loudly)

she said she saw amusement about her lover leaving his dna throughout time but you never really hint at children? :d