I’m afraid to say this is where I bid this story farewell.

I just don’t like your oc characters. Especially Abigail. They just rub me the wrong way and although I personally am not a big fan of Ron through the series at certain parts, I think his treatment in the story has been harsh. Also certain themes just stray to far from series for me.

For what it’s worth you are an excellent writer and trust me it’s hard knowing that I won’t be finishing the mystery here. I’m glad to see that you’ve kept updating. You have a good passion for the craft. I hope it takes you far. :)

great chapter

Good to see this story still going. Update soon please;)

Uggghhhh so good and I loved the cliff hanger. Can’t wait to read the next chapter!

ohh no toad will be fkd mommas here

DONT KILL SIRIUS

i am enjoying this. major evil i fear however light should always conquer darkness

fudge is fubared

live

Great job. That was a nice long chapter with allot of info. Keep up the good work and update soon please;)

great job

Super Mario

great chapter

Hope to see more updates coming keep up the good work;)

Wow such an interesting story, so many questions waiting for answers can't wait to find all of them out!

I hope all these different kinds of secrets between different groups of people don't result too much problems tho. Basically everyone is keeping huge secrets from each other.