Bruh we are already in chapter 9 and we don’t know about Sirja appearance. People keep saying that her hair is a giveaway to who she is but we the reader don’t know about and the chapters are so short

this was such a lovely story. I had to read it in one go. good job!

Love this work

Dang it. I would have absolutely loved this story if not for one annoying, nagging, important thing forgotten in this story. Sabo...the poor soul has been ditched to live a horrible life with nobles and will never have brothers to rely on D:
It was a wonderfully written story though.

Truly an amazing story you have written here! 3

That was a nice story! I'm glad you wrote a fic on Shanks, I believe he's an underrated character, but only because it's not his time to shine in the anime yet. We only ever know snippets of him and he already seems so amazing. It's a shame not many fics out there about him.

Anyways, I like how you still incorporated some canon things that happened in the anime, but twisted to fit your story. I thought for the longest time he'd have both arms. I like how Shanks is in your fic. He's so sweet and affectionate. I like Sirja as well. Seems like the type of woman Shanks needs haha There are some rough chapters where it seemed like it needed editing or a switch of some things, but other than that it was a good story. I enjoyed it. Thanks for the fic! (:

I'm loving this story so much emotion and action

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I loved it sooo much :) Aww the drama! The baby! LOVE THE NAME! Omdz...Makino and Mihawk..those dogs! Ahahaha, really loved the ending. I am sooo sad it has ended. This story is so emotional for me :') I remember the very first time I read it. Oh hun...I have like this permanent smile on my face, but at the same time I am feeling like a kind of ache, like "oh no...its finished". I dont know how to explain it. You know when you have been watching a show for like all your life and it just ends...that is the best way I can explain what I am feeling right now :'( But must say, great ending to such a great story.

Fantastic! I'm so happy you finished this good job! thank you

Poor poor girl! She will never have a boyfriend!
Please update soon!

Was Sirja's father about to call Shanks 'Vitun kusipää' ? :D

Awwwwwwwwwwww! Now, let the protective brother-hell begin!

Omg you have to update soon! I want to know what happens! poor luffy and ace that would be so scary to have there ship get attacked at such a bad time! please update soon I have to know what happens! thank you XD

uhhh...labor? is she in labor? but I thought it was still a bit before due date O: