Reviews for Broken
FireAndSteel chapter 38 . 12/3/2018
AAAAA what happens next
AnimeWolfGirl16 chapter 38 . 8/22/2017
Kevin clearly had a very serious pep talk in the bathroom... that or he really just had to go. The giraffe scene is by far one of my favorite in the game so far! Just imagine, humanity is struggling against this virus and everything still seems hopeless, but these animals are still thriving. Kind of makes you wonder sometimes if animals ever got infected, and if so, why Joel, Ellie, and Kevin never encountered them. Can't wait for the next chapter as well! Fun stuff coming up! Also loved how the chapter started out as well! A great icebreaker in all the seriousness!
doctorclotpole chapter 37 . 8/22/2017
I know you probably won't read this, and this is probably going to sound rude, but will you ever update this? Like I want to reread this but I don't want to read an unfinished story that will never be finished because it is just so great and jist uggh.
Guest chapter 37 . 6/7/2017
Hi there! I read this fic a while ago and I just found it again! So happy! I was just wondering, is this finished or has it been dropped? This fic is the best tlou fic EVEE! Thanks! :3
Cass87 chapter 37 . 9/7/2015
Wait so Ellie will find out the truth about what Joel did in SLC since her and Kevin switch place. If so, then...uh oh. :) Can't wait for SLC. Awesome ch. btw.:)
rcoolanimals chapter 37 . 8/25/2015
This is seriously the best Last of Us fanfiction I've ever read! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Dark Caramel chapter 3 . 7/2/2015
Soooo creative!
Dark Caramel chapter 2 . 7/2/2015
It is very interesting how you smoothly turned the idea into a fanfiction. Yes, that happens a lot in video games: trying to forcefully replace female characters by male ones and how hard it is to convince them that they do fine. Cool chapter, gonna be tough for Ellie!
Dark Caramel chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
The idea seems intriguing...
Tactus501st chapter 36 . 6/23/2015
Loved this chapter bravo I await the next chapter carry on with your writing good day!
Joelboi chapter 36 . 5/24/2015
When Ellie sees Riley and Sarah is it because the 2 of them are in heaven or is it all just happening inside Ellie's head and it's not real?
Cass87 chapter 36 . 5/22/2015
It me again. Kevin and Ellie are twins. I calling it! ;)
Cass87 chapter 36 . 5/22/2015
I love that dream scene with Ellie, Riley, and Sarah. Amazing job! :)
LadyLucina28 chapter 15 . 3/27/2015
The whole mirror thing made me think of what Dark Pit said in Kid Icarus:Uprising. 'We're two sides of the same coin.' So Kevin and Ellie are kind of like that.
Guest chapter 35 . 3/1/2015
Shit it didn't post my name. Same person who left the novel: lonelyaura
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