Oh my gosh Jiraiya needs some new hobbies lol but his perviness did make for a great story 10/10 altogether it was just amazing the detail put in is exquisite! Great Job!

hahahahhaha, so good, loved it

lol sakura smirking at hinata we just left your idiot boyfriend naruto in his transformed female form at the bathhouse have fun no condom

Hey I'm B.K I would like to say that fic was genius I loved I think you should add into and sasuke

LMAO I thought there are a official picture drawn by the Naruto creator itself where Sakura was scowling at Hinata at onsen with Naruto holding his bleeding nose in the back ground. Sakura is flat and she hides her boobs with the wooden thingy and scowl at Hinata's body. The artwork is pretty famous btw. That is where the flat jokes come out. I just want to inform btw.

You should make a sequel for this story. It was interesting to read but "maybe tone down the lemon part a part"?

WOAH

Omg

This needs to be rated MA.

This is so awesome! hahah.. I don't know what else to say anymore.. but I really enjoyed reading this..
xD

Hahaha

Jiraiya's the man!

LOL

I find this really cute! :D

10/10

Why are you so amazing?! That was really good! And I loved the ending hahaha. Well done!~

Please tell me that there's going to be a sequel. It doesn't have to be lemony I just NEED to know what happens next.

10/10
Fucking fantastic! Definitely the best that I have read in years. Good concept, great portrayal of the characters, easy to read paragraph lengths, grammar skills that don't melt my eyes, beautifully written emotions, and an ending so wonderful that I had to leave a review. You should be proud of yourself and your writing ability.