Aww! This is awesome!

Hi! I was actually going to request a story from you as a challenge. Heres try basic plot. A techno organic names Devyn (no full cybertronian I hate that) meets the Autobots with Miko her best friend after moving from Chesapeake Virginia. Her mother is named Stacey and her parents are divorced. She has short red/blonde hair tan skin hazel eyes a lot of freckles and is about 5'7 I'm height and thin. She is around 14 years old and she is an artist she lives to dance and sing and draw. She is very sensitive to her emotions and her style consists of a lot of skirts . She is very brave and will do anything to protect anybody even those who are evil... She is on track team and falls in love with Ratchet! She is very poetic too! But that's a challenge! Primus be with you! I will bring you over a hundred followers if you do trust me -Primus

I loved this very much. But I believe th writers meant the meaning unwell, rather than unwillinging because they would never have ratchet say that to the kids because he knows they aren't stupid.

But I do live your spin on it and it was very well in character.

THAT WAS AWESOME! The kids are saved AND Team Prime still has the Omega Keys! That is TOTALLY what should've happened instead! Loved the ending so much! And how Jack vented his frustration was completely in character! Loved this story sooooo much!

Very nice, very nice indeed :)