Noice

They love each other! whooo!
i love your story!

Enjoyed the story, but I really just have to ask. You know that skim milk isn't dairy free right? If Sakura were lactose intolerant she would need to drink almond or soy milk. Skim milk still has lactose in it, it just has the fat removed.

Beautiful narration! Just a few things I didn't particularly like, not to say that it wasn't bad. I just didn't like the awkward transition, where she suddenly "fell" in love with him. From where? why? why now? I feel like that should have been addressed in a better manner.

Also, it just came off to me as slightly rushed pacing. But that was just my opinion. But, I just felt there was a lack of depiction of Naruto and Sakura's relationship dynamics. It wasn't discussed at length of how close they really are and how well they know each other as teammates.

But the story was a cool concept, keep it up! Good job!

Wow its great... Thank you for releasing this.
Pls update to next chapter

wow

that was very good short read

Man dude ,that was so good you should make more Narusaku stories.

I'm not even halfway through the story, but I scrolled down anyway to tell you 28/10 in my opinion.

By the way, try and limit yourself to at most 15 emphasized words a story, and only 2 in one paragraph. Can just look a little awkward.

However, the rest is amazing (I don't know if Sakura's lactose intolerant or not canon-wise or if you just put it in there, but it was a good add in)!

Oh gosh update narusaku plez

well this was nice Ino and Shikamaru engaged aye

seriously wish that this was what would've happened canonically! well written and even shed a small tear myself!

Thank you for all this. Ino great work on helping your Pinkette sister. As for ShikaIno engagement?! OH MY CHERRY BLOSSOMS! They belong together just as NaruSaku does! I knew Naruto with what Sakura confessed/apologue he couldn't reject her, he loves Sakura with all his heart/soul.

It's amazing on how you brought Naruto's character. I mean, his disappointment toward Sakura are so real I was afraid this would turn to tragedy, but I was relieved that it ended well. I also love how they need third party to make them be honest to each other. Great story I love this!

How it should have been