| Reviews for Stay Over |
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   ayoungwriter chapter 1 . 4/1 okay first and foremost even if i havent read the fic yet, the summary SENT ME AHAHAHSJD that was so straight fORWARD,, none of that lemon linggo i found that extremely hilarious after reading thru dozens of summaries w fic lingo |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/2/2016 It is nice |
| Emily robinson chapter 2 . 2/20/2016 Hi you are a very excellent stroy writter i loved that story n i was wonderin if u can make more with jack n rapunzal rate this story 10 stars if i could thx emily robinson Ps you should become an author that was great |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2015 u shuld have made her suck his dick |
| 3 chapter 1 . 6/8/2015 I loved it! For your first time you did very well! Word choice is good, could be improved though. I do think you rushed Rapunzel's climax though. Maybe adding a little more detail and time in between would help. Also adding what jack is feeling while pleasuring his lover would definitely be a plus. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/4/2015 Very good! |
| kai chapter 2 . 2/16/2015 Lovelyyyyyyyy it's so so so lovelyyyyyyyy |
| MallyHonan chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 Loved ;-; |
| Aladia Shadbolt chapter 2 . 11/6/2014 Wow! So inspiring i loved the ending and the description. Very seductive! I am looking forward to reading more of your fantastic vivid ideas. - Aladia |
| Jasmine chapter 2 . 11/2/2014 I really really really really really LOVED this! You are an amazing writing. Please continue to write. You are AWESOME! |
| STD chapter 2 . 10/23/2014 Worst ever! |
| IAmAFallenMischiefAngel chapter 2 . 9/20/2014 Holy SHITOSKY MUSHROOMS! WOAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2014 I have no idea but this is weird and I'm not a fangirl I'm just bored at 2 am |
| no name chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 me no like |
| Juliana Mendez chapter 2 . 7/1/2014 I love Jelsa. But this is nice. Carry on! :D |
