I read this many times, and it is wonderfully written! Your characterization felt spot on, and your description was well done. The concept is amazing and I very much enjoyed reading this. Koodos to you!

I loved this, I've come back and read this at least twenty-five times. You'd think I would have memorized the whole thing by now!

i love it and your writing style.

Wow, this is like the third time I've read this, but I still love it. I think I read this on one of your other web pages though. Glad to see it here. Great job with this!