Lol I'm pretty sure Naruto never says 'precious people' like ever in the series... if anything I am fairly certain those two words were first used on a Fanfiction story 15 years ago..

really great story please continue it author-san.

great start at the start i thought you described me really but he cares about his new family i woudnt i dont even care much of my one right now and if i had to restart as baby i would probably hate my new family cause they are too annoying.

It's always the good ones that die out..

you're dead if you didn't want to become a ninja. you're an uchiha. you can become a breeding stock easily. you must at least know self-defence. being a civilian there is hardly safe nor is being a ninja really. but at least you can defend yourself.

This story has a few good aspects but falls short in the most important one, The protagonist. Miko is a person without ambition who prefers to laze around all day instead of leveling up and getting stronger. By itself that wouldn’t be the worst part but you need to keep in mind that she is an uchiha, and Itachi will soon kill the clan. The story would be a lot more enjoyable if Miko was more driven.

Yoko's reasoning is really far fetched. It's like she has some mystical force helping her reach the right conclusions.

Yeah miku is fucking stupid and insane now. Miku is gonna get offed unless naruto saves the day. which counts as divine intervention by author. A little sad i dont get to see miku killed by itachi. It really would have been the best way to end this at this point. Having the moral of the story showing that by doing thier best they can be awesome like Naruto. That even if you dont always succeed you can try. Having miku portray the sins of pride and sloth. That even though the game kept giving them all these chances to succeed they just wouldnt put in the effort and try. Miku kept trashing on naruto like they were inherently better when even they acknowledge their own worthlessness.

Lol, Even miku admits to being a worthless character. They are basically a profile of what no to be as a person. This story really should end with itachi killing them and them suffering in hell or something for failing in their first afterlife so hard.

Another OP item and he barely was willing to put in the effort to train to use it. Why is this character the main pov?

Your just going to have miku use that OP mask item to survive. They were given it for no reason whatsoever. Why did they get such a strong item for practically doing nothing at all. Miku is Still whining that naruto is better instead of trying. Hell they just admitted they dont care cause none one in this world is real. Miku is a Terrible gamer. no competitive edge at all except when facing weaker opponents.

Ah i see, finally giving miku free access to unlimted exp. then blaming the system that they didnt find ways to get exp before then. Yeah, i know im being a hater to miku, but the story is good even if miku is horrible at 'the game of life'. Idk why i keep leaving so many comments... Actually it might be that I identify with him prior to his rebirth and i am self projecting cause he is failing so hard. He really should drop out an just got be florist or something. He really is not cut out for this. I expect 'the gamer' power to kick in hard now and suddenly make him talented.

Yeah miku dissing naruto when miku is utterly pathetic is just sad. The more i read this the more i want the younger sister to live to avenge her older sister miku and parents. at least yoko is trying to get stronger, perk or no perk. Each time miku trains it is complaint after complaint about being sore. Honestly let miku die and have the gamer power be gift to her.

Over half his time is up and hes lvl 2. Itachi is gonna be like lvl 80. Is he just hoping to wing his way through the massacre or something? 64/130 int, I honestly think this guy is delusional that he is that intelligent. He keeps making dumb choices and his priorities really need an adjustment. At this point it looks like he will only survive the massacre due to divine intervention by the author.

Cardinal sin of fanfics # 1 - genderbending characters. Applies to SI and OCs.
He really doesnt get the concept that he is doomed if he doesnt get OP as fast as possible does he? He is supposed too be a huge manga fan so he has obviously read Naruto. Yet he is just lazing around in a kill or be killed world. He is a 'gamer' figure out the system and exploit it.