Also, on the smoking thing, there is over 4,000 ingredients including rat poison and nail polish remover. Great story!

awwwww
so kawaii!
love love love

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daw that was cute. I'm not a fan of smoking either :) keep up the good work!

I love it! It was really well done and had a great message. I actually really liked it since its very similar to how I got my boyfriend to stop smoking.. Just like in Lucy's case, my grandfather passed away from lung cancer... Since then I've hated the thought of people smoking when they know they could die.. Nice one shot! :)

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Wow! You, you really made this! I'm so happy *bow deeply* yeah i'm upset when i saw him doing that but i'm glad he quit :) Me too, i lost my uncle because of that bad habit and i'm allergy to dust and smoke from cigarette. That's why i'm so curious and interested to know the reasons why Gray stop smoking. Silly me, huh? ;p

I'm agree with FriendsForevaa, slightly rushed when the romance about to start. But nothing enjoyment ruining. Still fun to read. And i still catch their feelings toward each other :)

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it, Analytical :D *hugs*

there already is a story about gray adorable.i dont like lucy in this story , she seems annoying.

awwwwwwwwwwww i wanted her to smack him

Ok, I really love your stories but I have a slight criticism. They begin wonderful but when the romance bit starts, they become slightly rushed. Nothing enjoyment ruining. This one was comparatively better or more like great. I loved it. Great job:)