| Reviews for White Blank Page |
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  write more soon chapter 5 . 8/20/2013 write more soon |
 Undying Dame chapter 5 . 8/20/2013 No, no, noo... I NEED more of this story! Can't wait for the next chapter. I am really loving this! |
| BadgerBailey chapter 4 . 8/3/2013 I just started reading this story today and honestly, it might not have been what I was looking for, but it has caught my attention and I'm loving it. I like the endings that kind of trail off, they are interesting and they create questions in the reader's mind. So I would look at that as a positive thing. Just remember to answer the questions you leave out there. (Doing a wonderful job with that already.) Dialogue is good as long as its productive. I like the banter they have going right now. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see where this will go. |
| ribbit5000 chapter 4 . 7/27/2013 This is very interesting! |
| Opalbrat chapter 4 . 7/26/2013 Love this story. :) |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/24/2013 What a wonderful start. I don't think jareth should wake up right away, every one is asleep because she doesnt have imagination to feed them any more. I think the ground should collasp under her ans she us forced to find her way through the underground. She is forced to confront memories that she has tried to ignore. And when only when she execpts reality will she able to wake the king from him his sleep... You seemed like you needed an idea. |
| Blame the Faceless chapter 3 . 7/23/2013 Wow, not quite sure whats happening, but interesting nonetheless. You often use this unique little analogies that I just find riveting while reading. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Opalbrat chapter 3 . 7/18/2013 Love this! |
| FelineGrace chapter 2 . 7/16/2013 Wow! I love the last part! FINALLY something actually interesting happens! :P All the talk about school, softball, and friends was getting irritating! Now something magical happens! Update soon! |
| HachimansKitsune chapter 3 . 7/18/2013 ohh...interesting. |
| artseblis chapter 3 . 7/17/2013 I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Jetredgirl chapter 3 . 7/17/2013 This story is very impressive! Love it already! |
| Honoria Granger chapter 3 . 7/17/2013 Nicely done. I don't think you need to worry at all about your endings: they seem to work perfectly as both little cliffies and logical places to pause. I'm dying to find out what happened and if Jareth is okay...please don't keep us waiting too long! And thanks for the nice read. |
| Honoria Granger chapter 2 . 7/14/2013 Great stuff! Love what you're doing with Sarah. So, let's have some Jarethy goodness, please! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Looking forward to the next update. |
