I have a question is the cat Ivypools talking to Hawkfrost

Female
warrior
Dark Forest
Aggressive and evil
Ravensong/Tigerfang
Lionflame

Cool

I never got tol you who said the quote it was dr. Suess
-author of Generational

Name: Fernshadow/Moonheart

Gender: male/ she-cat

Rank: warrior (if so deputy)/ warrior

Clan: Thunderclan

Appearance: black with orange spots/ silver tabby

Personality: like Dustpelt/ gentle caring

Apprentice: Skypaw/ Smokepaw

Mate: Moonheart/ Fernshadow

Kits: Hollypaw, Orangeflame, Skypaw ( adopted Skypaw)

PLEASE WRITE MORE! And add these character.

I'd give it an 8.3. It was pretty good, just try to make things more cohesive.

Name: Duskshade

Gender: Tom

Rank: Warrior

Clan: ShadowClan

Appearance: He is a large, jet-black tom with green eyes. His right ear is torn.

Personality: He's a cocky tom who loves teasing others with playfulness. While he is a bit arrogant, he knows his boundaries. Duskshade is notably respectful to leaders, elders, and queens. Everyone else, though, is fair game to him.
He's also fiercely protective of all kits, no matter their heritage.

Apprentice: Poppypaw

Mate: Icecloud

Future Kits: Ravenkit and Thrushkit

Other: He and Icecloud meet in secret, in the same place that Dovewing met Tigerheart.

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Name: Poppypaw

Gender: She-cat

Rank: Apprentice

Clan: ShadowClan

Appearance: Ginger tabby with long, bright fur. Her eyes are pale green.

Personality: She's a loyal cat who does her best to stick to the rules. However, she is quite rude to other clans, and finds the other three to be lower than ShadowClan. She even hissed at Mistystar once.

Mentor: Duskshade

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Name: Ravenkit

Gender: She-cat

Rank: Kit

Clan: ThunderClan/ShadowClan (lives in ThunderClan)

Appearance: She's a small, black kit with a patch of white above her nose. She has blue eyes like her mother's.

Personality: She grows to be a gentle cat who seems to follow her brother into trouble. Ravenkit also shows eagerness to become an apprentice because she want to help care for the clan.

Future Mentor: Molewhisker

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Name: Thrushkit

Gender: Tom

Rank: Kit

Clan: ThunderClan/ShadowClan (lives in ThunderClan)

Appearance: He's a large, dark gray tabby kit with white paws and chest. His eyes are green.

Personality: He is quite adventurous, and has an odd ability to get others to listen to him. Thrushkit is also a bit cocky and over-confident in himself. While this means he is not easily put down, it also makes him kind of arrogant.

Future Mentor: Jayfeather (later Dovewing)

Other: He was originally a medicine cat apprentice, but found it to be not very satisfying compared to his sister's training. So he became a warrior's apprentice for a change.

10 I love it. Also I'm a muslim too.

Plz update! I give it a 9 on the good scale, but only a nine cuz some chapters are short. I love this though!

You are an amazing author!

I knew it!

Is Thornclaw flirting with a cat seasons younger than him?

Helllllllloooooooo
Lavi are you there? I want more of silverclaws backstory

Name: Firepaw
(Warrior Name: Firelight)
Gender: female
Rank: apprentice
Clan: Thunderclan
Appearance: like Flamelight but the white stripes are brown and the rest of her fur is ginger
Mentor/Apprentice/Future Mentor: Flamelight
Future Mate: Flamelight
Kits: (none for now)
(yes i know Flamelight Firelight but i'm a digimon fan and my favorite season is frontier my favorite characters are Takuya and Koji fire and light flame and light get it now good)

Name: Flamelight
Gender: male
Rank: warrior
Clan: thunderclan
Appearance: flame colored with white stripes (like a tiger)
Personality: shy, patient, and strict with training
Mentor/Apprentice/Future Mentor: Firepaw (warrior name is Firelight female)
Mate: Firelight
Kits: (none for now)