This was good . I wish you would write about others in this context ... You brought it home ..

Thanks for the read.

Interesting story. I liked it. Thank you.

I really like what you did here. Don't misunderstand me, I despise this character; but I also know that in life nothing is black or white even, or especially, when it seems to be exactly that. You presented a perspective here that most would never even consider. Personally I think you were too kind, but it doesn't change the fact that I applaud you for putting this story out here.

Poor poor Elena...hell no die bit

Good writing. I appreciate how you tried to get into her mind. But after reading your first story with Christian's facing the abuse she did to him I cannot sympathize with her.

I've been a fan for a while, i can't wait until you Finnish your last story fifty shades full circle , and i love how you ended the bitch trolls life. Thanks for being apart of fan fiction, and making it worth my time.

Very nice chapter... Wish for more

Sad but I still think you were to nice about her. Yes I believe she had demons but it gave her no right to take and use a 15 year old boy who had demons of his own to fight over. She gave him only more demons, she gave him more self doubt, self hatred and what is so sad in your story she knew it was wrong but couldn't stop herself. What does it say about her that she knew it was wrong and when everything came out, she wasn't adlut enough to say she was sorry to Christian, and esp., to Grace. Yes she betrayed Christian, his innocence but she betrayed Grace in such an awful more way. Grace befriended her and this was the thanks Grace got,seduce and abuse her son who was already broken. However Elena dies in any story of fanfiction she can never atone for her sins and end in the end dies alone, sad.

good ridden... bitch troll Elena.

Weird, different and awesome, the old bitch troll is dead.

Happy New Year !

That was great, but can you write more about Elean's back round, how she became to be the way she is.

I think you actually made me feel sorry for Elena. Didn't know it was possible.

Damn woman, sick and evil and should die...

:-)