Very well written. The sex scene was hot, but it made me a little uncomfortable because dean acts as both a caregiver and a lover. I also wish Dean had not cheated on Sam and then tried to rationalize it.

Still grossed out by the Weecest, but at least Sam and Dean's thoughts revealed in this chapter make Dean seem a little less sick. I still think the story would have been easier to stomach if the Wincest had started when Sam became a teenager.

Very intriguing Wincest. The Weecest is highly disturbing, and I had to skip it just to keep my dinner down. I decided to keep reading only because you are very good at story telling.

Very interesting take on episode one...

I've been working my way through your stories and this was my favorite so far!

is there gonna be a sequel? i need a sequel!

I am practically cheering at this point.
This story so far has been more enjoyable than the last 2 professionally published Supernatural books I’ve read.

Welll, you did warn us going in. Yeah I just skimmed the weecest part. I don’t have issues with ADULT Winchester, but the kid stuff makes my skin crawl...so I guess you can say that means the writing as done well enough to be realistic?
But the story itself is engaging and the adult characters are true to the established personalities.

Wow, well that was just brilliant. I've loved your story, it was so well constructed and Bloody Hell ! you respected each character so perfectly that I'm now wondering what the first season looked like instead of this.
Thank you so much for your work, I've adored reading you, you have a real talent. I wish you all the best in your life, and maybe see you around !

Im out sam is a selfish dick and his only gonna contine to hurt dean!

Great story. This is actually my first wincest and truthfully i hate it. I love brotherly love but incest is just wrong. I still feel the same after reading this but i have to say i was hooked. I hated the initial flashbacks though where sam was like 3 that just felt like crossing a line no one should, but god i'll be lying if said i wasn't rooting for them.
Also i hate lucy like hell for hurting sam . And actually i couldn't picture john as a bad guy for wanting his sons not screwing each other but im glad it ended the way it did.
You're amazing i never thought i could like incest but it was so understandable and i love you for that.
Keep doing the good work.

Every time I think John couldn't be a worse father I read that neither boy had a carseat, especially Sam. A part of me wants to skip to the end for some relief, some closure, but this is such a good story l have to read each chapter. This will definitely go into my favorites.

I love you for writing this story. Thank you so much for all of your stories. Thank you. I loved this story from beginning to end. Granted I hate John a bit more now but I hated John from the second he walked on screen (I'm exaggerating slightly but not the point) so like that's fine. But seriously keep at this. I love them all and you are quickly becoming my favorite Wincest writer. Thank you for your stories 3

I haven't finished the chapter yet but I just want to say, honestly, like. Okay, dude. Amazing work.

You have this dynamic (that isn't too far from the truth of their relationship) about Sam having Dean on a leash and Dean being so protective of Sam. And it is sooo refreshing to see it unfold with the flashbacks. I just really love reading this story, man.

Thanks. Now I'm gonna get back to it!

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