Please update your story soon!

You said you didn’t give up on this fan fiction yet it has been about 5 years since the last update please update this

Could you please start this fanfic up again really enjoy it

Bravo Delphim great chapter keep it up my multi personality plagued dude ya writing amazing and I can't wait to read another one hope you continue to develop this fic as it brings great joy to read the pure smut you put together so again thank you

Xxx peace out xX

This story is so cool please continue it, I love the whole 'dark creatures aren't that bad' schtick you got going on and I can already picture what is I store next in this story so please by all means continue this story and make it's true potential blossom like a flower thx 4 it time -J. Vermilion

Bergonus tribe.

Love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon!

Please update this story again, it is really good, and I look forward to seeing more chapters.

Update?

One offspring per lifetime for nundu? Two parents... Unless they are hermaphrodite, they will halve their population per generation. Add hunting...

You need to learn how to spell. And learn the English language as well. Her name is not Tracy Davies it's Tracy there is a a difference between to and too and quiet and guite.

The hat was put on his Head not in his head.

Not orange hair it's red. Hagrid IS a half giant not a giant.

You have much to

Interesting story. One thing though, I've always felt that you shouldn't need capital lettering to show that a character is yelling. It just seems clunky and it really take you out of the story, and exclamation point can usually get the point across.