Will his halves merge together?

please update, it's brilliant. Will Willy turn more mature and will be there Willy x Charlie?

Please update, I love it

Just read through this entire thing.
I really like it. Multiple personality Wonka is kinda different.

At first I thought that there was some kinda clone factory building hundreds of different Wonka clones, but then you explained the multiple personality stuff. Nice. Also scary. Charlie should probably be running for the hills, but then I guess Wonka (or those evil conniving Oompa Loompas) would probably just hunt her down.

Angry-evil-genius Wonka and way-too-innocent-to-function-as-an-adult Wonka really need to be merged into one perfect version of himself.

Also, ha-ha, the kidnapped kids as superheros. LOL. Mike would so be the leader. I actually have serious doubts that their parents are actually alive and ok with their kids being test subjects.

Can't wait to ready more, this is a very creative story.

One tiny critisism though, your scene changes are sometimes really abrupt and jarring. Suddenly your in a completely different location and I don't know how I got there.

Still look forward to reading more of this in the future.

YOURE ALIVEEEEEEEEEE

I may not be able happy that you haven't written your new story yet but that's fine just please write it soon.

Please write your new story soon. Will Mr Wonka have a dark side in the new one?

It's a bummer that this one is dead (I was really loving dark!Willy), but I TOTALLY understand. Definitely following you - I really like your writing style.

Nice story. Honestly, you may have overdone it just a tad with the superhero's (Though Violet and Mike's powers are highly probable). Also, I noticed when you were doing the movie bit that you kept missing out Willy's name in places, but only like, 2 handfuls.

I like how you portrayed Charlie and the ages of the kids/teens. Also, totally called it on the whole MPD thing soon as I saw(read about) Will. Though I will admit that, at first, I thought he was a psychopath (Cause I'm fairly certain that's what the original is), then you threw his 'childish' personality in and I was like, huh?

Great story, kinda sad that it won't be finished, but great all the same. Good luck in any other stories you write, I'm sure they'll be great and I'll keep a look out for the other Charlie story (if it ain't already out).

I hope the new story is as goid as this one ir better! :)

Ah, I need an update! I love crazy Wonka!

plz continue, it was getting so interesting!

i jam out to stuff that reminds me of a character i really like, which is mainly Fall Out Boy. also, i love how friggin childish willy is!

"Hug attack!" That's a good one.

Nasty squirrels, adorable oompa loompa and cat for soup. Lol. I love your OC.