Love

this is so cute

I think Oriana is more interested in Miranda than she is in Shepard, and he's just her excuse.

wow you are my M fic hero :)

Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Goooooooooooooooo!

holy hell Oriana was sexist as all hell.

... I...wow..just...wow. Great story my friend.

Pretty hot. Only comments are that I'd have suggested focusing more on the women in the costumes and just writing it as pillowy, even if that's not a proper word.

Look forward to whatever you do next.

Ah, the wait was well worth it. Another amazing story for your run. I have to say you have the best M-Shepard straight-smut stories in the entire section. And I've perused quite a bit of the others. I have to say, although I know you have a thing for the Asari and the other alien woman races in the game, I would love to see you tackle another M-Shep/Miri story. I can't get enough of that pairing. Either way great story, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Very well done. Deffinatly worth the wait. I must confess that I wish Kasumi had played a more...active role in the activities, but there's always hope for next time!

Good luck with your next update. Please update soon, but don't rush. Great work like this takes time.

Cue Oriana going out to become a porn star *thumbs up*

Lawl, nice stuff. Good work.

Never get tired of your work. :)

Looking forward to what you do next (Hoping it's another Asari one)

Thanks for the shout out! Great ending for this fic too, there's not enough MShep/Kasumi out there. I'm hoping within a month or two I can get back into my writing, but you know how real life goes. Keep being awesome!

In the name of [REDACTED] the Most Aroused of His/Her Name of the House [REDACTED], King/Queen of the Smut and the Kink and the First Fill, Lord of the Pornet and Protector of Depraved Fantasies; I, TheHand, do command His/Her Grace's most loyal subject, CobaltAC, to do fealty to the fandom and produce a sequel to "The Sister's Lawson."

His/Her Grace does not wish to force a time constraint; but it must be, at minimum, thrice the length of the original piece and with even more vulgar displays of anthropocentric hedonism. Miri-Ori-Shepard action is the preferred material, additional players are optional.

His/Her Grace would prefer the story to be a collection of one shots, each unique from the other, spread across a multiplicity of settings - fantasy, modern AU, steampunk, spy thriller, cyberpunk, sword-and-sandal epic, space opera, etc - and contexts - public exposition, sibling incest, menage-a-trois, voyeurism, philandering, dual pregnancy (yikes!), fantasy fulfillment, sex games, - rather then a traditional story line organized in a sequential fashion. Arcs connecting a series of shots into a plot are permitted and encouraged but should be interrupted by other shots and and arcs.

A writer's bounty is to be awarded if the title of work should be named "House of Lawson".

awww. thanks for the shout out! But my stuff isn't that good, most of the time i feel like I'm trying to polish turds.

But anyway i loved this story and the ending was fantastic! I really hope you don't plan on ending the other asari fics so quickly. (especially the one about the brothers, that one is really fascinating.)