I enjoyed this story so much! It's exactly the kind of thing I wanted to read and you stayed true to the characters. You should write more stories with them too.

Wonderful story! More please

This is a wonderful story. You're showing every person's perspective beautifully. I hope you come back to it some day and show us the reaction after the "grand reveal", perhaps Anderson and Donovan. But even without another work, it's a lovely story.

I love it hope to read more soon. Poor molly I feel so bad for her. The shock thing just reminded me of the first episode when Sherlock didn't know what shock was, nice touch there. Please Wright more soon can't wait to keep reading your story is addictive.

Wow! This an awesome story. Great job!

Absolutely spectacular! This...THIS is how they SHOULD have filmed the reunion...gear that Moffett?

So gorgeous! I've just read this story again from the beginning, and it reminded me of why I bookmarked it in the first place! Bloody brilliant! Also, thanks for the rec for Needles and Pins - I wouldn't have found it on my own, but it's a lovely piece too!

Oh, I absolutely love this! I know I've seen most of this before, and I said so then, but your writing is just simply wonderful! I can't ever get enough :)

I especially liked Sarah's involvement and how she seems to fangirl over John and Sherlock finally getting together. And I /loved/ Sherlock's entrance back at 221b. His "big reveal" to Mrs. Hudson was just the right touch of dramatic.

Can't wait for more!

One thing I've always loved about your writing is how you pay attention to the little details of a scene, like with Willoughby making the lighting of the dining room easier on Mycroft's eyes, and the subtle mood shifts, like with Sherlock suddenly questioning the validity of his new relationship with John. They've each made great progress in coming to accept who they are, both alone and with each other. I'll be interested to see how Greg and Molly add to the mix! :)

This is handled so well...WELL done!

Your writing is beautiful, touching and so good i cannot wait for the chapter :-)

I am absolutely loving this story! The way Sherlock and John interact is perfect, and like that they are taking time to work through there relationship from the past and into the present. Keep up the great work!

I know I've already said this before, but I love everything about this chapter, from the way Sherlock automatically reaches for John to the ending that reflects the first case the two worked on together. Now that I think about it, ending this chapter with a reflection on their first case is like a new beginning, almost like they're wiping the slate clean (though not quite, obviously, since they aren't ignoring the past, merely moving on from it). Anyway, I love this, and thanks for the lovely mention in your author's note :)

I loce it! This is the best reunion story I have ever read! I can't wait for more!

I love your line..."and my heart was yours long before I knew I had given it away"! Beautiful! Love this. Though I usually like more "action", I have loved this...your handling of "voice" is wonderful.