Can you make a part 2 please?

It's Orichalcos, not Orichalcose.

I thought it was H-Heated Heart.

I LOVE Hetalia! Also, what's TMZ?

Shouldn't it be "I know Pegasus denies ripping-off Transfromers with this...", since it's Pegasus that makes the cards?

just cause he was raised with a family like that doesn't mean he's got to be like them if it were like that they'd be no good people in the world

just cause he was raise with a family like that doesn't mean he's got to be like them he's an ahole

where s belowski duel part its not in this chapter

I have one thing to say about Twilight/Puppy Love: VAMPIRES SHOULD NOT SPARKLE!

C.D.

I remember this episode where it was Alexis the dude was crushing on and he was doing the same thing with Jaden as with Bastion when Jay called Alexis Lex(i) or something of the sort and fought over who would be her fiancée. To this day I still don't think Jay knows what a fiancée is. Though I don't think Alexis minds being "engaged" to him.

C.D.

I have to say this was a great story, found it once a long time ago but lost track of it and recently rediscovered it . This is probably the best female jaden yuki fanfic alongside gender generation . I love the twists like jaylin being adopted by yugi and her actually being different from jaden

I saw you have a sequel up. Going to. Check it now

Dude the whole thing of Jaylin saying that Banner is an evil villain isn't off point. Though I never saw him as a 100% evil villain since he cared for everyone in his own way. Plus the reference reminded me of the one villain in the Inspector Gadget cartoon and Dr. Evil from Austin Powers (Been awhile since I watched the movies so I think it's Dr. Evil) where both were villains and owned cats.

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In relation to the A/N's and Jaylin having her girl issues. I know how she feels about the time of the month and having accidents with it. There were a few times where I had some at school and the school nurse had to call my mom for clean pants and underwear for me. Once I got sent home cause I over bled onto a school chair in my one class in 6th grade.

C.D.

i wish you luck with this story i will not be reading it anymore

Aww, that was short, but sweet.