What a nice thing to read before going to sleep :)

Oh Mai gosh! So adorable! I don't think Haruka would ever drown though.

So... I'm sitting here, its 4am on a Tuesday and I'm- I dunno, crying? I can't really understand why either.
I might be happy that this was so cute or sad 'cause this was saddening...

This was really good, one of the best MakoHaru fanfictions I've read

I feel really bad cuz I just wrote a review on another fanfic saying it was the best I'd ever read, and it was, at the time, but this definitely topped it. Goddamn you're talented. Thanks for making me smile like an idiot at four in the morning, it was worth it. 3

And you made me speechless with this enchanting story. I felt giddy and warm when reading how desperate Mako-chan singing his praises for a reason of why he should be with his Haru in their Water. Just like in the novel version, I loved it very much. It's so enchanting that made me wanna go to the beach and just watch over the tides . . .
"Breathless" . . .
Thanks for sharing!

Aw, it's so cute! X) I'm too in love with this pairing, and your writing style is perfect for them! Your writing makes them even more perfect and beautiful and cute and perfect!

Anything you could possibly write about Makoto and Haru seems perfect! I really admire your skills! I wish I could write half as good as you can!

So much moe! ! its beautiful! I love it so much! could you do one for Rintori? that would be awesome! oh my gosh like I wanted to cry! Thank you! Thank you for the beauty!

This was so beautiful. I loved it. This is like the first gay anime paring I've loved and they are so adorable and you just increased that adorableness by like a lot. Keep up the good work man. Loved your writing and story. Makoto and Haruka are so adorable together.

Aw cute!

I have to say, this was one of the most beautifully written pieces of work I have seen. Not only among fanfictions, but among books and poems as well. I applaud you, and thank you, for sharing such a beautiful work with the world

supah good

This...

Music drives me. Playing is for me, what water is for Haru. So, naturally, I love the fics that surround the characters in a musical world, letting the notes take them away from reality into another world, another existence. Sadly, there aren't many that can do this properly- for me, anyways. The few that I have found, I have copy-pasted and saved them and printed them out, to cherish them forever.

But this...this is the first one not of musical inclinations that has made me feel what music does to me. This is...beautiful. Truly, deeply beautiful. I *felt* what what happening, and, for a few moments, loved-needed-embraced water almost as much as Makoto and Haru. I *do* love swimming, but it's mostly a thing borne of wishing to stay cool in the hot climate I live in, but this...it was something else.

As beautiful-inspirating-awe-inspiring as the music fics I so love. Thank you so much for writing this and posting it up here for us all to read.

Best Wishes,
Duchess

im crying. this piece is truly stunning and one of the most beautiful stories i've ever read. thank you so much for writing this and congratulations for having such a talent.

Jeez. This is about as sexy as I can take for 10 am on a Sunday. But it's so beautiful I don't mind. Good job.

This was beautiful and i loved it so very very much.