Hot blonde love ftw. Great story.

this was a great story abit of action then the lemon what's not to like lol

Good. One of my favorite pairings.

dude your awsommmmme

Lololololol

Well DC316 it's a good thing I read the epilogue of your Icha Icha story with Naruto and Ino 'cause I was about to plead with you to not do a chapter featuring Kurotsuchi. Other than being a complete bitch as you so rightly put it, I'm not 100% sure if Kurotsuchi if all female. The way she carries herself I swear I wouldn't be the least bit surprised if Naruto were to strip the slender kunoichi down to nothing and discover that she's packing a tallywhacker in her shorts(poor Naruto would probably have the same reaction as Roger Prodacter from the first Ace Ventura movie).

I was going to suggest that in lieu of a Naruto/Kurotsuchi pairing that instead you have Naruto in a three way with my lavender eyed goddess Hinata and the ultimate expression of femininity in the Village hidden in the sand: Temari.

I can see why your so taken with the busty kunoichi from Sunagakure. She's not afraid to carry herself as a confident female who's very secure with body and sexuality while at the same time she doesn't hesitate to put the smack down on some fool who thinks she can't hack it as a warrior born and as the Kazekage Gaara's eldest sister.

Two things about your story though: 1) the line "bring it on bitch," did you get the inspiration for that from the movie "Charlie's Angels Full Throttle?" And 2) your choice for members of the newly reform Council of Konoha is something that took me by surprise and at the same time is something that Misashi Kishimoto should think of when Naruto eventually becomes the brand new Hokage after the Fourth Great Ninja War is over.

Anyhow I hope to see more of your Icha Icha series in the future and if you could think about the proposed ménage e trois I mentioned. I know Hinata and Temari are kind of like day and night but the common factor in between could help to unite these two fine females into one common goal: bringing ultimate pleasure to Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze, the savior of the ninja world.

Until next time, SV33 out!

where is hinata in this story. just out of overall curiosity.

I concur; Kuro IS a bitch. Hell, she's practically a female Sasuke, dark hair and eyes included, urgh...

I SO called that reference, that's the second one, including that line in Naru's battle against that Ice-user in Koyuki's "Snow Princess" from the climax of Anakin and Obi-Wan's battle

Make the next iCha iCha pairing naruto and hinata

You should have ino to convice naruto to take over his mind and share pleasure while ino is screwing her own unconscious body.

You and Raptorcloak are my Heroes

I'm sorry for your loss, but it was a still a great lemon regardless though.

Take care,

-IR

I know how you feel my grandma has cancer and only has 6 months left

No kurostuchi come on she's not that bad

You and raptorclock are incredible writers