Reviews for The Beast Within
sthrobbins chapter 20 . 10/20/2019
We're back to the Harry who sleeps for days and cries for weeks. Harry needs to wake up long enough to go shopping for some brightly coloured French-cut bikini knickers with matching training brassieres. Then he should quit magic, travel to the States and go on Dr Phil's show and talk about his precious feelings to someone who's paid to pretend he cares. harry was grazed by a silver arrow- walk it off Potter, wizard up.
sthrobbins chapter 8 . 10/19/2019
Just what fanfic needs, another weak-as-water Harry. A simple cold puts him an his back for days on end. Someone needs to change his nappy and tell him to man up.
Smullies chapter 7 . 2/18/2019
Keep up the good work
hufflepuffiesten chapter 29 . 2/9/2019
I come back to read your AU stories over and over again. I really like how you write Harry and Ginny's relationship, I like how Ginny plays a bigger part in Harry's life, how she is his main source of comfort.
Alphros chapter 29 . 1/20/2019
An enjoyable story. I had been hoping for at least some beneficial aspects of being a werewolf rather than everything sucking for Harry, but that doesn't itself detract from the story and it was fun to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Great story but saying someone getting red in the face 30 times a chapter got rold after chapter 3 so I started to skip ahead don't know why everyone that writes a fanfic thinks Harry has to be so shy he get red in the face over everything
Jimbocous chapter 29 . 6/8/2018
Thanks for a great read, very nicely done! Definitely looking forward to the continuation of this.
Raven J. Haile chapter 29 . 2/22/2018
God's it was amazing. I stayed up till nearly two am, along with a horrid headache, just to finish this. I cannot wait to read the sequel. :3
Guest chapter 28 . 6/6/2017
I enjoyed this AU story between Harry and Ginny,I really enjoy the young love between them.
werewolfandproud chapter 29 . 2/18/2017
I absolutely loved this story, I would really like to see a vampire AU and i think you could write one and it would be awesome.
Erimenthe chapter 29 . 1/26/2017
Going to stalk your stories to find any more about this AU. It was wonderfully done and I want more now.
John james chapter 29 . 1/7/2017
Awesome
Anna Mara chapter 19 . 12/18/2016
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOT REMUS!
paz chapter 29 . 11/27/2016
Incredible
Harrypotterpercyjacksonfan90 chapter 29 . 11/15/2016
Very good story thanks for writing it! Will read the sequel when I can!
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