Reviews for Family Ties
spitfyre1 chapter 5 . 5/16/2019
Not to be a...nag, but they didnt figure shield out till after Tony escaped...its still the strategic etc etc cannonly currently
atw2162001 chapter 7 . 4/27/2019
Please make the rewrite. Please!
deathwearsblack chapter 7 . 3/24/2019
please take your time updating.
Yebba11139 chapter 7 . 2/13/2019
You said that three years ago from today! Please do if you plan to!
dead feather chapter 6 . 12/27/2018
No, Id rather not see Hermione here at all.
I think the beginning was best in this. The whole idea has a lot of potential but maybe Hailey should be more low-key in shield. Maybe even a squib which would explain why Harry has not heard of her.
Also Harry was so rushed in finding a job. Why didnt he concentrate on Teddy a bit longer?
And now that the avengers verse is much larger, maybe this would suit better in actual Avengers time rather than Iron man?
And if your muse ever inspires you to edit, the first scene with Tony felt so weird. Why would Harry paste his painful history on the walls and explain it to all who ask in such a detail?
dead feather chapter 4 . 12/27/2018
Three years since Harry left? When did that go by? What exactly is Haileys position in shield that she can tell Fury what to do?
Hermione was a surprise, even in three years I expected her to be in a lower position. What happened back in Britain?
dead feather chapter 3 . 12/27/2018
I didnt even think tony/hailey at this point but good that they wont. It feels... wrong. Hailey is a good background character but she would get timehogging if she is in a major part and I want Harry, not her. It already felt weird how Harry answered all Tonys questions and that Harry had put those pictures on the wall at all
tamashiyuki chapter 7 . 11/22/2018
Be continued?
animerule64 chapter 7 . 7/8/2018
Add more chapters please
Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2017
As you're doing a rewrite, please rethink a Tony/Harry pairing. Both are old enough now the age gap(ridiculous, my parent had a 15 yr gap) has disappeared. They know each others quirks & foibles. A great friendship makes for a great love affair. Story is excellent, Hailey is believable, with enough spice to make her interesting. Taking in a teenage boy with a child without a second thought, remarkable. Hermione was a good friend till post 7 yr. What influenced her ? Where is Ron while she is working for an American super team? Are they split? No children? A bit more Harry-Teddy action. Harry shouldn't trust anyone there; Teddy is their link to Harry. Another direction to add depth to the story,
Guest chapter 3 . 8/16/2017
give us the gay man. we thirsty.
9551832-Delete-account-please chapter 7 . 8/12/2017
Well I just found this Tory so I can't hate you but all I can say is I hope you update soon.
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 7 . 3/22/2017
I certainly do not hate you. I know all too well the needs of a writer. I fondly await the next story of Harry Potter.
Elfin69 chapter 6 . 2/26/2017
So will Teddy have any problems at Hogwarts and will Harry have to pull him to move him to another school or will he be safe?
Elfin69 chapter 5 . 2/26/2017
Looks like Harry is gathering quite the family
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