Sorry, nothing personal, but its kind of boring.

I actually thought that if didnt rain so much, Robb would cross the river in different place how he intended and never needed Freys this urgently, but youre right, I never actually read a story which did it like this one. Im looking forward to it.

Hey man im absolutely loving this story. Im really excited to see how having more of his guards survive will affect other battles and his personal safety. Also will there be a P.O.V in Kings Landing to show how they are acting differently. And finally what are your plans for the Tyrells are they going to feature heavily or not so much?

I like this series

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Awesome...update soon

This is an awesome fic, you could involve a couple of minor battles later on, like the retakings of Stone Hedge and the Blackwood Vale and Raventree. You could include the Battle of the Ruby Ford as well.

Great chapter. Very nice to have a view point from within Riverrun. In response to your vote, my answer is: YES. Please can you keep the OC's relatively in perspective though. I honestly don't mind how long you take to update as long as you DON'T abandon this story! Please update before the end of October.

Another good chapter. Well done on your characterisation of Robb. It can be hard to write POVs for those who got none in the books, but you've done well here.
Not much else to say, really, except that I hope we get to see some Frey conflict in the future! Keep writing! :D

Ooh. I like it so far. Lord Walder dying like that was sudden, but certainly not unwelcome. I think your writing is pretty good, few grammar problems but nothing too serious. Looking forward to reading more.

I very much like where this is headed. It's definitely original.

I thought you did a good job with the battle. Keep up the good work.

Damn! For a moment I was afraid you were gonna kill off Wendel.

This is great. With Daryn Hornwood alive there won't be the issue with Hornwood succession, and with the Karstarks alive hopefully Lord Rickard will remain loyal.

This is getting better and better. I'm looking forward to more.

"clutching his other gauntleted hand held to a vicious cut in one of his many chins was Wendel Manderly"

This! The perfect use of the Manderly fat and guile!

Some minor grammar mistakes, but nice premise. I like it.

Great chapter. For a minute I genuinely thought that you were going to let the Northern army butcher the Lannisters in their camp but I guess that was too AU. Thanks for the answers you gave me. Please update again soon.