Jesus christ, dude. Learn to fucking spell.

that epilogue was beautiful, and the last thing that Anakin said is a title all men should strive for and forever cherish.
you make awesome stories, a lot I have read and reread over and over again.
you are a really good author.

This story was and is absolutely Glorious. Thank you for making this story.

This was an awesome story and alternate ending of Star Wars.

I mean this is how the movies should have panned out. Especially since Anakin was the chosen one. I mean why did he deserve to just be killed off in the movie with little chance to redeem and right the wrongs he did with rebuilding the republic.

And how he also brought back the Jedi order makes a lot of sense especially with the changes so they are not a stagnant preset they once where. Resulting in better more powerful Jedi who are not blinded by arrogance.

Anyway man nice read and I really thank you for the hard work you put into this.

And good to see Mon Mothma get what she deserves the bitch... that’s how that slut would of been in the movies had it not played out how it did in the movie instead..

So cheers and thanks man

Obi-Wan is infuriating to read about here. It’s like Dumbledore 2.0 I swear

Involving star killer and the video games was stupid

This is out of character for Obi-wan all though I see what you're trying to do I was on board with at first but now everyone expect Leia seems out of character. I'm sorry

There are not nearly enough fics that start like the first third of this chapter did.

Well done. Enjoyable from start to finish and well written. Though, it would have been nice to have more Leia towards the end

Vader! How's my favorite Sith? Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, just slow down. Huh? What do you mean 'they blew up the Death Star?' Fuck! Oh! [slams fists on his desk] Fuck, fuck, fuck...Who's 'they'?! What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?! [sighs] Okay, okay, s-so who's left? Are you shittin' me? Well where are you? Wait a sec, you've been flying around for two weeks trying to get a signal? Oh, you must smell like...feet wrapped in...leathery...burnt...bacon. [Holds phone away from ear as Vader obviously yells at him] Oh, oh, oh, I'm sorry I thought my Dark Lord of the Sith could protect a small thermal exhaust port that's only two meters wide. That thing wasn't even fully paid off yet! Do you havedo you have any idea what this is gonna do to my credit? ...what? Oh-oh, 'just rebuild it'? Oh, yeah, re-real fucking original. And who's gonna give me a loan, jackhole, you? Y-you got an ATM on that torso Lite-Brite? Now get your seven foot two asthmatic ass back here or I'm gonna tell everyone what a whiny bitch you were about 'Padamamay' or 'Panda Bear' or whatever the hell her name is!...Oh geez, he's crying! Heh, heh, heh...[Aloo and Amedda silently laugh]...Hey, hey, hey, hey, c'mon. C'mon, don't do that. Just, just, look, ah, y'know, I'm dealing with a lot of crap right now. Eh, Death Star blown up by a bunch of fucking teenagers, y'know? I didn't mean to snap. [Motions to guests a gesture of 'jacking off', showing Vader's gullibility] Oh, oh, j-just get back here. Okay, okay, bye. I-yeh-I...I love you too.

So. Very. Nice !
This fic is epic haha thank you xD

Being as this is my first SW fic, i have to say, well done. It did get boring with all the political mumbo jumbo, but then so did the actual cannon. Could use a touch up as there were a few errors like missing/incorrect words like were and where, miniscule stuff like that.

Sorry about your family's lost. We had a cat with us for 19 years before he passed about 4 years ago, so i can understand the suck. Hang in there, remember the time fondly you had with the family member, and keep moving forward.

2nd favorite Darth Vader redeems fanfic.
1st is My Daughter. You should read it.

Who else hates Mara Jade in this book? I know I do.