I love when every once and awhile in a sea of lackluster writing I come across a beautiful gem of a story. Great job.

Beautifully written.

Great but sad story! Very well written! :) keep up the great writing!

Really good story. I have been trying to write something like this about Tony and Jackson. Where it's Tony after Jackson's death.

that was incredibly sad. beautifully written, but brought tears to my eyes. so, i guess i could say - well done ;-)

oh my...ugh...that was heartbreaking. the last lines were a wonderful closure. this was perfect. thank you for a gem.

Thanks. Just thanks. If the story wasn't sad enough, when I figured out which paragraphs paired with which lyrics, I sang them. Then, I sang the entire song with your lyrics at the bottom. I'm *thiiiis* close to crying. Hope you're happy.